Tourism is becoming a good source of revenue to many countries. Discuss the advantages
and disadvantages of exploiting this resource.
It is undoubtedly true that tourism is one of the most profitable industries in many countries especially the developing one. But it is hard to ignore the disadvantages tourism brings. The aim of this paper is to discuss about both benefit and drawback of this smokeless industry.
There are merits of tourism, First of all, it solves the unemployment crisis. This smokeless industry provides jobs for the local and there is several new occupations associated with tourism such as tour guild or the travel accountant. Secondly, the tourism help preserve the culture heritage. It turn legacies into a lucrative business which makes money on restoration.Lastly, the tourism is eco-friendly. Tourists do not want to visit a pollutant place so the travel agencies take the responsiblity for conservation of ecosystem and resource management to make the destination more authentic and desirable
Beside the advantages tourism brings, there is also many drawbacks.Firstly,the tourism may contain the risk of increasing social evils. Smugglers, Hijackers and other kind of criminals disguised as tourists to cross the customs. In the second place, the visitors cause the damage with things like pollution, forest fire or heritage destruction.The unconscious of one tourist can cause immeasurable danger. Last but not least is the loss of national cultural identity. Tourists from afar also bring a part of their culture with them and the local, especially youngsters, easily fascinated and forget about the national culture
In conclusion, the tourism is have the benefit of job creation, heritage preservation and environment-friendly. Nevertheless, it may contain social evils, vandalism or national cultural loss
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, lastly, may, nevertheless, second, secondly, so, then, as to, in conclusion, kind of, such as, first of all, in the second place
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 11.0 24.0651302605 46% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1463.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 261.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.60536398467 5.12529762239 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0193898071 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.36587803131 2.80592935109 120% => OK
Unique words: 160.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.613026819923 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 453.6 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 7.0 2.52805611222 277% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 84.0759729695 49.4020404114 170% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.538461538 106.682146367 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0769230769 20.7667163134 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.9230769231 7.06120827912 169% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.141397647928 0.244688304435 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0529766942998 0.084324248473 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0472540840232 0.0667982634062 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0919211643575 0.151304729494 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0675888504446 0.056905535591 119% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.0 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.26 12.4159519038 123% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.53 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 78.4519038076 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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