Many animal species are becoming extinct as a result of human activities. What are the causes and possible solutions to this problem?
It is an undeniable fact that most of the creatures are now on the verge of extinction because of the catastrophic human activities. The main causes include the loss of habitat and hunting of animals for various purposes. The solution to this problem will require participation by individuals ranging from the common people to the government officials.
To begin with, the major reason for some animal species becoming endangered is the damage caused to their natural habitats. For activities such as road and house construction and making way for fields, deforestation has been carried out by the authorities and the farmers respectively which has drastically impacted the count of wild animals. For instance, the giant panda species has been declared extinct despite the establishment, since 1963, of 14 panda reserves in China. To combat this situation, the regime should chalk out conservation management plans to build more reserves, promote reforestation and protect the forest boundaries. This can substantially contribute to saving the creatures from getting disappeared from the planet.
Another significant cause of extinction of many animals involves animal poaching and hunting by humans. Many people illegally use the skin and other body parts of animals for smuggling which fetches them a whopping sum of money. To exemplify, white tigers and black deers are hunted by many for their skins and teeth which has led to a shocking decline in their overall count. As a potential solution to this problem, the government should implement stringent laws against illegal hunting of endangered species and more importantly, people should also follow them diligently.
To conclude, undoubtedly, thousands of animal species have become either endangered or completely extinct mainly because of various environmental threats posed by mankind, such as deforestation and animal-hunting. Such an issue can be controlled to a considerable extent if authorities introduce heavy penalties against forest destruction and illegal animal hunting, and people also abide by the rules actively.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, for instance, such as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 11.0 24.0651302605 46% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 18.0 8.3376753507 216% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1782.0 1615.20841683 110% => OK
No of words: 319.0 315.596192385 101% => OK
Chars per words: 5.58620689655 5.12529762239 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22617688928 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.01587600911 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 190.0 176.041082164 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.595611285266 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 549.9 506.74238477 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.6742102015 49.4020404114 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 127.285714286 106.682146367 119% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.7857142857 20.7667163134 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.92857142857 7.06120827912 56% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 3.9879759519 251% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.287637821478 0.244688304435 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0932977154489 0.084324248473 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0642459453451 0.0667982634062 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.169345257361 0.151304729494 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0472265288883 0.056905535591 83% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.3 13.0946893788 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 50.2224549098 81% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.44 12.4159519038 124% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.73 8.58950901804 113% => OK
difficult_words: 101.0 78.4519038076 129% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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