Studying in an university is thought to be a waste of time and money by some which might be true for some cases. Nevertheless, I mostly don't agree with this statement because of some specific reasons such as some high skilled professional jobs do require regular university education, free education or education by study loan and internship or industry attachment in a degree, are worthy for bolstering a career.
To begin with, professional practices such as doctor, nurse, lawyer, accountant do need an university degree. Without it, it's not possible to acquire licenses for these fields. Moreover, for some sensitive professions, no one would take services from the professionals without a degree such doctors. No matter how much real experience may have by a quack does not attract patients unless having a university qualification and a medical license.
Further more, many countries such as Germany, Turkey provide free education for everyone at the university level and, many developed countries provide education by loan for their citizens e.g. Australia (FEE-HELP), USA (FAFSA) which can be paid by the students after completing their study and from the earnings of their jobs. So in that case money is not an issue.
In addition, most of the degrees, now-a-days, provide co-operative or internship options in the final year, which ensure them get valuable experience from the industries that turns into a full-time job for some cases. Many universities have strong connection with the big companies to supply their Top-graded students to them.
To recapitulate, for some low-level jobs, an university education may be a waste of time and money, however, for higher levels job, an university is still a high investment in terms of both time and money.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
Studying in an university is thought to be a waste of ...
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Suggestion: don't
... for some cases. Nevertheless, I mostly dont agree with this statement because of so...
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Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
...ctor, nurse, lawyer, accountant do need an university degree. Without it, its not ...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
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...oped countries provide education by loan for their citizens e.g. Australia FEE-HE...
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Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
... recapitulate, for some low-level jobs, an university education may be a waste of ...
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Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
... money, however, for higher levels job, an university is still a high investment i...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
e.g., however, if, may, moreover, nevertheless, so, still, in addition, such as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1486.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 284.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.2323943662 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10515524023 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89803064694 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 170.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.598591549296 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 472.5 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 87.6193872656 49.4020404114 177% => OK
Chars per sentence: 135.090909091 106.682146367 127% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.8181818182 20.7667163134 124% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.54545454545 7.06120827912 121% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.198539461471 0.244688304435 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0769748682711 0.084324248473 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0487808314489 0.0667982634062 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.117640603652 0.151304729494 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0436382733402 0.056905535591 77% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.1 13.0946893788 123% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.64 50.2224549098 75% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.35 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.05 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 78.4519038076 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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