I agree with the author that technological advancement should be to increase people's efficiency so that everyone has more leisure time. I concede that technological advancement has enhanced our efficiency as we go out about our everyday life. There are different application and software on the internet, which makes people life more comfortable.
Due to technological advancement, people can do multitasking at once. Productivity software helps us plan the schedule, coordinate projects, resources need for a plan, managing the budget of the program. It also provides the graph representation of the project summary view, which helps to understand the project more efficiently — applications such as messenger, skype best way for communication in the present world.
It helps to communicate with different people, and information sharing is speedy. It also helps in sharing data and essential files in less time. Satellite technology even helps us prepare our food and access entertainment more efficiently. For Example, Youtube is helping people to learn different things and also saves time and money. If a student wants to learn computer programming, he/she can watch computer programming language video online, and he/she do not need to for any programming language class, which saves time and money. It helps to learn different things in a short time, and a person can have some leisure time.
An even more striking example uses of machine and robots in different factories which reduce encumber work for people which also prevents people from getting injured. Use of robot and machines increases the productivity of the products, which helps people to get some leisure time. Nowadays, people also using robots in household work which clean your house and reduce work.
In sum, different technological advancement which reduces effort and works for the people and helps them to get some rest and leisure time.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 365, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[4]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'skype the best'.
Suggestion: skype the best
...ently — applications such as messenger, skype best way for communication in the present wo...
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Line 3, column 83, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...ple, and information sharing is speedy. It also helps in sharing data and essentia...
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Line 3, column 460, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'she' must be used with a third-person verb: 'does'.
Suggestion: does
...mming language video online, and he/she do not need to for any programming languag...
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Line 4, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... a person can have some leisure time. An even more striking example uses of ma...
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Line 6, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ich clean your house and reduce work. In sum, different technological advancem...
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Line 8, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...hem to get some rest and leisure time.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, so, for example, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 19.5258426966 20% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 12.4196629213 48% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 14.8657303371 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.3162921348 97% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 33.0505617978 64% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 58.6224719101 49% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 9.0 12.9106741573 70% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1632.0 2235.4752809 73% => OK
No of words: 302.0 442.535393258 68% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.40397350993 5.05705443957 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1687104957 4.55969084622 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.92032706419 2.79657885939 104% => OK
Unique words: 165.0 215.323595506 77% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.546357615894 0.4932671777 111% => OK
syllable_count: 510.3 704.065955056 72% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59117977528 107% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 6.24550561798 112% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.99550561798 20% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.77640449438 169% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.38483146067 23% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.2370786517 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 23.0359550562 78% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 42.7330010062 60.3974514979 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.0 118.986275619 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.875 23.4991977007 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.125 5.21951772744 41% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 7.80617977528 77% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 10.2758426966 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 5.13820224719 19% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.83258426966 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.223461583408 0.243740707755 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0900247542095 0.0831039109588 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0826228337067 0.0758088955206 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.147219340633 0.150359130593 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0729301819411 0.0667264976115 109% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 14.1392134831 95% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 48.8420337079 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 12.1743820225 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.04 12.1639044944 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.4 8.38706741573 100% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 100.480337079 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.8971910112 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 11.2143820225 82% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 54.17 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.25 Out of 6
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