Nowadays, more and more ancient energy production system like fossil fuel industry has been replaced by the newer system like alternative energy industry, whether the advantage overcomes the disadvantage has generated a hot debate. While i hold the opinion that we can largely benefit from this new alternative energy than the older one.
To the one hand, using the alternative energy is a new way of energy production so the price will be much higher than the older one. Before we have got used to producing a large amount of energy in a lower price so it seems difficult to accept that the energy price will skyrocket. Many energy companies have not prepared for that change and consumers also will be challenged by this higher price. For instance, the yellow jacket mouvement in France is a good example. People who just have a miserable salary to support their life could not afford the price to pay for the gasoline, so they have to go to the street to manifest in order to the gain the attention of the government. If we order them to accept the alternative energy, they will probably have more problems to meet theirs needs.
To the other hand, with the use of alternatif energy, our environment will be definitely improved due to the reduction of the carbon dioxide. As we all know, our planate is suffering everyday because of the fossil fuels, and the global temperature increases every year as the ozonosphere has been broken by the effet of carbon dioxide, so it is essential for us to find a solution to protect our environment and the alternatif energy must be the best way. Moreover, Wind power and solar power are both environment-friendly since they just use the nature's power to generate powerful energy for human being. With the acceleration of the use of alternative energy, we could not only make sure that the demand of energy will not be influenced but also the creation of pollution will be largely reduced.
- Fossil fuels such as coal，oil and natural gas, are used in many countries. Recently,in some countries,the use of alternative energy including wind and solar power has been encouraged，Is this trend a postive or a negative development ? 56
- The table below gives information about the underground railway systems in six cities. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparison where relevant. 56
- Fossil fuels, such as coal, oil and natural gas, are used in many countries. The use of alternative sources of energy, including wind and solar power, is encouraged. Is this trend is a positive or negative development? 67
- Some people think that cultural traditions will be destroyed if they are used as money-making attractions aimed at tourists. Others, however, believe that is the only way to save these traditions. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion. 73
- Fossil fuels, such as coal, oil and natural gas, are used in many countries. The use of alternative sources of energy, including wind and solar power, is encouraged. Is this trend is a positive or negative development? 73
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 233, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “While” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...isadvantage has generated a hot debate. While i hold the opinion that we can largely ...
^^^^^
Line 1, column 239, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...ntage has generated a hot debate. While i hold the opinion that we can largely be...
^
Line 5, column 184, Rule ID: EVERYDAY_EVERY_DAY[3]
Message: 'Everyday' is an adjective. Did you mean 'every day'?
Suggestion: every day
...s we all know, our planate is suffering everyday because of the fossil fuels, and the gl...
^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, moreover, so, while, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1607.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 335.0 315.596192385 106% => OK
Chars per words: 4.79701492537 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.27820116611 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68822502744 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 174.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.519402985075 0.561755894193 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 541.8 506.74238477 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 64.0557482892 49.4020404114 130% => OK
Chars per sentence: 133.916666667 106.682146367 126% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.9166666667 20.7667163134 134% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.0 7.06120827912 57% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.38176352705 68% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.175218029168 0.244688304435 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0688923185907 0.084324248473 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0527656223547 0.0667982634062 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.122040431911 0.151304729494 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0267945935941 0.056905535591 47% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.1 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.07 50.2224549098 88% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.86 12.4159519038 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.61 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 78.4519038076 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
---------------------
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
---------------------
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.