A job with more vacation time but a low salary is better than a job with a higher salary but less vacation time.
since the career is an indispensable part of our lives, whether or not a job with more relaxed time is better than a job with high income but less enjoyable time is often a debated topic. some people argue that they are more willing to work hard to get rich bonus though no time is used to have a rest. however, I strongly believe that I prefer to have a job that contain abundant vacation time due to the following reasons.
Firstly, if people have more time to rest, they could share time with family members, especially their children, which will develop the family relationship. The reason is that family plays an important role in our everyday life. people should closely keep in touch with family members so that they will not be left in the dark of lives of other members. By contrast, if people are occupied with work all the time, a barrier between the family members is more likely to be generated because some misunderstanding or problems could not be solved directly and immediately after coming to light. take myself as an example, when I was a primary student, my father was fully busy with his job and had no extra time to accompany me. In this way, I feel very lonely and thought that my father he actually did not love me, so I had a bad relationship with him. Fortunately, my father found out this severe problem and then changed his job that have much more vacation time. after that he always took me out to play as long as he finished job. Consequently, relationship between us improved and I contended that my father is the best. Through above example, I argue that a job with more relaxed time is a better choice.
Secondly, it is an effective and practical way for people to release pressure coming from mountainous workload. it is because that people, today, live in a rapidly changing society, therefore, every company hopes to stay competitive and be successful, which extremely depends on each employee’s endeavor. Hence, people will be burdened with huge pressure. Obviously, the vacation time is their only time to take a breath, which will relax themselves, and then boost their energy to work harder. take my friends as an example, my friends Tom get a really high demand job that requires every employee must meet monthly performance standard. however，he never complain about this tough task since his company provides a large amount of time for employees to relax, even subsidize them to travel with family or friends. he uses those vacation time to relieve stress and has a good rest. As a result, my friend keeps a good state of mood and outstandingly accomplish his work every month. In a way, I agree with idea that a job is necessarily equipped with more vacation time.
Admittedly, money has power to attract and motivate individuals towards higher performance, because if people have much money, they could do whatever they want such as traveling different places, tasting delicious food, buying a new house. however, all stuffs need a prerequisite is that people should guarantee they have time and vigor to enjoy. In other words, if people are always fully committed to work, they have to put enjoyment off infinitely. since people cannot take belongings into their grave, it is better to live a comfortable life while they are still alive. Accordingly, vacation time is much more crucial due to the fact that it could help people to achieve their ideal lifestyle.
Although money is very tempting, valuable vacation time is beneficial to our mental and physical health as well as harmonious family. These reasons make me believe that a job with more relaxed time is much more attractive.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, actually, but, consequently, first, firstly, hence, however, if, really, second, secondly, so, still, then, therefore, well, while, i feel, such as, as a result, as well as, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 29.0 15.1003584229 192% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 9.8082437276 133% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 13.8261648746 123% => OK
Relative clauses : 20.0 11.0286738351 181% => OK
Pronoun: 74.0 43.0788530466 172% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 67.0 52.1666666667 128% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.0752688172 124% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 3018.0 1977.66487455 153% => OK
No of words: 628.0 407.700716846 154% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.80573248408 4.8611393121 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 5.00598923014 4.48103885553 112% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62260131331 2.67179642975 98% => OK
Unique words: 318.0 212.727598566 149% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.506369426752 0.524837075471 96% => OK
syllable_count: 967.5 618.680645161 156% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 16.0 9.59856630824 167% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 10.0 3.51792114695 284% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.94265232975 162% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 29.0 20.6003584229 141% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.1344086022 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.1557359594 48.9658058833 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.068965517 100.406767564 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.6551724138 20.6045352989 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.93103448276 5.45110844103 127% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 14.0 5.5376344086 253% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 23.0 11.8709677419 194% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.381707542854 0.236089414692 162% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.115302701682 0.076458572812 151% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.116464619871 0.0737576698707 158% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.257090742491 0.150856017488 170% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.102493184937 0.0645574589148 159% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 11.7677419355 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 58.1214874552 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.1575268817 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.62 10.9000537634 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.92 8.01818996416 99% => OK
difficult_words: 129.0 86.8835125448 148% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 10.002688172 130% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.0537634409 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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