The diagram below shows the process by which bricks are manufactured for the building industry.
This is a map which exhibits in detail the steps required to make bricks which are greatly implemented in construction projects.
As illustrated, there are seven consecutive stages in brick manufacturing procedure.
The first step is excavating the clayey soils to obtain the necessary raw material. Then, the soil particles are passed through metal grids and the passed material are conveyed using rollers to the mixing site. At this point, the soil will be placed in moulds. This stage can be done with two different methods. One of the methods include moulds which each produce just one brick, while in the other approach the mud passes through a mould that produces a strip of joint bricks which later by utilizing a wire cutter transforms to several individual bricks. After that the wet bricks will be put in an oven for 24-48 hours in order for them to get dried. Next, the primarily dried bricks will enter moderate and high temperature kilns which respectively expose 200 C - 980 C and 870 C - 1300 C heat to the dried bricks. This stage ends with bricks passing through a cooling chamber where they stay for 48-72 hours. After that the bricks will be packaged and finally, they will be delivered to customers by trucks.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, if, so, then, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.0 157% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 1.00243902439 599% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 3.15609756098 285% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 10.0 5.60731707317 178% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 26.0 33.7804878049 77% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1027.0 965.302439024 106% => OK
No of words: 211.0 196.424390244 107% => OK
Chars per words: 4.8672985782 4.92477711251 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.81127787577 3.73543355544 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.51031946305 2.65546596893 95% => OK
Unique words: 135.0 106.607317073 127% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.63981042654 0.547539520022 117% => OK
syllable_count: 289.8 283.868780488 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 1.53170731707 261% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 1.07073170732 374% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 8.94146341463 123% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 22.4926829268 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 53.119543959 43.030603864 123% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.3636363636 112.824112599 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.1818181818 22.9334400587 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.18181818182 5.23603664747 61% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 10.0 4.09268292683 244% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.178054220817 0.215688989381 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0649231536765 0.103423049105 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0558389999232 0.0843802449381 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.136443421222 0.15604864568 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.00154468722086 0.0819641961636 2% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 13.2329268293 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 61.2550243902 113% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 10.3012195122 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.97 11.4140731707 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.25 8.06136585366 102% => OK
difficult_words: 49.0 40.7170731707 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 11.4329268293 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.9970731707 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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