Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? At universities and colleges, sports and social activities are just as important as classes and libraries and should receive equal financial support.

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...ts different form.but the importance of these kind of activities has been called into ques...
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...ctivities has been called into question.i believe that doing sports and meeting u...
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...lly during university life for students.i feel this way for two reasons I will ex...
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...nfluential role in intact mental health.For example,many scientific studies suggest...
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...ealthy mental development for students. What's more,if we included sports a...
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... social activities in universities plans,that would help in cutting off all the expen...
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... of not underestimating these concepts. In conclusion,every academic institute s...
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... on youth personalities and health minds,alongside raising a healthier stronger generation...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, may, moreover, so, for example, for instance, i feel, i mean, in conclusion, kind of, in other words, to begin with

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 15.1003584229 33% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 9.8082437276 61% => OK
Conjunction : 23.0 13.8261648746 166% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.0286738351 45% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 27.0 43.0788530466 63% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 52.1666666667 79% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.0752688172 99% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1871.0 1977.66487455 95% => OK
No of words: 317.0 407.700716846 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.90220820189 4.8611393121 121% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21953715646 4.48103885553 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.38461254883 2.67179642975 127% => OK
Unique words: 205.0 212.727598566 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.646687697161 0.524837075471 123% => OK
syllable_count: 577.8 618.680645161 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.51630824373 119% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 4.0 20.6003584229 19% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 79.0 20.1344086022 392% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 189.410268993 48.9658058833 387% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 467.75 100.406767564 466% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 79.25 20.6045352989 385% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 31.0 5.45110844103 569% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 23.0 5.5376344086 415% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 11.8709677419 25% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.88709677419 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.212177295815 0.236089414692 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.125328187318 0.076458572812 164% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0257734124194 0.0737576698707 35% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.125328187318 0.150856017488 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0257734124194 0.0645574589148 40% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 46.0 11.7677419355 391% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -25.63 58.1214874552 -44% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 20.3 6.10430107527 333% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 36.5 10.1575268817 359% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 18.12 10.9000537634 166% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 13.03 8.01818996416 163% => OK
difficult_words: 110.0 86.8835125448 127% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 30.5 10.002688172 305% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 33.6 10.0537634409 334% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 31.0 10.247311828 303% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?

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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:

para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.

So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:

reasons == advantages or

reasons == disadvantages

for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.

or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.

Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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