University is a golden gate by which students should prepare themselves for their own future jobs. Thus, it can be defined that the main goal of coming to universities is to not only train students for becoming professional engineers, lawyers, and Doctors but also to adroit, dexterous ones. from my own perspective universities should allocate their budget equally to both parts of education and sport and social activities. In the following paragraphs, I will describe the most outstanding reasons.
The most significant reason which has to mention is that everybody in society cares about his health. these days in the 21st Century because of science and technology progress our life is going to be less active if we compare it to 1 century ago. So people have not enough activities as much as its necessary for their health. if a university considers a reasonable budget for sports activities and provides a professional place, students will be more encouraged to do exercise by visiting these options and by the way the university is helping them to improve their healthiness.
Another reason which deserves some words here is that doing sport and social activities on campus is one of the ways which may lead students to communicate with each other more. when students come to classes and lectures, most of the time they concentrate on logical materials and do not have enough time to talk to each other and get know their classmates well. But at the gym, during doing different exercises they can have warm communication together. There was research in 2011 which indicates that 40% of university students have found their best friend accidentally and inadvertently in sports clubs of the university.
Although the aforementioned reasons are the first ones which cross the mind at first glance, it should be mention that sometimes there is an opportunity to raise an Olympic champion from this group of students who are doing sports at universities with excellent facilities. As it's clear to everybody, there are two kinds of Olympic games, one for professionals and the other for youth. if a student during his physical education course is able to show his talent in a special type of sports, it is possible for him/ her to join his university team and participate in this kind of international game.
To make a long story short, in spite of the fact that training well-educated people is the main purpose of the universities, paying more attention to students' sport and social activities can effectively help this matter of great importance. as mentioned in the last paragraphs doing sports would be beneficial for students in many aspects. Consequently, it is highly recommended that what kind of sport is much more famous in each country, so the university can decide to put his financial aids to which types of sports.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, first, if, may, so, thus, well, as to, kind of, by the way, in spite of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 15.1003584229 146% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 9.8082437276 112% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 13.8261648746 116% => OK
Relative clauses : 16.0 11.0286738351 145% => OK
Pronoun: 40.0 43.0788530466 93% => OK
Preposition: 63.0 52.1666666667 121% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.0752688172 99% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2371.0 1977.66487455 120% => OK
No of words: 472.0 407.700716846 116% => OK
Chars per words: 5.02330508475 4.8611393121 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.6610686524 4.48103885553 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87852474939 2.67179642975 108% => OK
Unique words: 250.0 212.727598566 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.529661016949 0.524837075471 101% => OK
syllable_count: 740.7 618.680645161 120% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 3.51792114695 171% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6003584229 87% => OK
Sentence length: 26.0 20.1344086022 129% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 60.4634620818 48.9658058833 123% => OK
Chars per sentence: 131.722222222 100.406767564 131% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.2222222222 20.6045352989 127% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.33333333333 5.45110844103 98% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.5376344086 144% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8709677419 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.188685001308 0.236089414692 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0615029905601 0.076458572812 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0438248319202 0.0737576698707 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.110921653017 0.150856017488 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0171582188113 0.0645574589148 27% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.3 11.7677419355 130% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.09 58.1214874552 78% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.10430107527 183% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 10.1575268817 132% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.13 10.9000537634 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.17 8.01818996416 102% => OK
difficult_words: 97.0 86.8835125448 112% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.002688172 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.0537634409 123% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.247311828 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 80.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 24.0 Out of 30
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