A friend you met last year has invited you to visit him/her in his/her country. You have never been there before and need some information before you leave.
Write a letter to your friend. In your letter:
request advise about a gift for his/her family
ask about activities and clothing in his/her country
find out about the food
Dear Jack,
I am writing to say that I agree to visit Canada, but I have never been to it. Therefore, I would like to ask some information relating to the country prior to my flight.
First of all, I need a few details about what your parents prefer. I am concerned about what to bring to them as present, because I am unaware of what is popular in your homeland. So it would be nice, if you help my with it. Secondly, I need to know what clothes to include in my luggage. I easily catch a cold, until I wear an appropriate outfit. I would be grateful, if you inform me regarding to usual garment in Toronto. Finally, I want to learn about traditional cousin in region. I have heard that the food in your country is considerably different from that in Kazakhstan. It is important to me, since I am allergic to milk-made dishes, that may kill me.
I am looking forward to your reply as soon as possible, as it is necessary for me to find out what I can expect in your hometown. You can either send me this information to my email address “tolikxxx@mail.ru” or call me on the following number 87001444413.
Best wishes,
Tolegen
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, if, look, may, regarding, second, secondly, so, therefore, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 4.92783505155 162% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 5.05154639175 40% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 45.0 32.9175257732 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 37.0 26.3917525773 140% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 948.0 937.175257732 101% => OK
No of words: 211.0 206.0 102% => OK
Chars per words: 4.49289099526 4.54256449028 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.81127787577 3.78020617076 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.08712390417 2.54303337028 121% => OK
Unique words: 127.0 127.690721649 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.601895734597 0.622605031667 97% => OK
syllable_count: 291.6 290.88556701 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 9.13402061856 142% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 1.83505154639 327% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.463917525773 431% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6804123711 110% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 30.5791879339 44.8134815571 68% => OK
Chars per sentence: 67.7142857143 76.5299724578 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.0714285714 16.8248392259 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.57142857143 4.34317383033 151% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.161007930891 0.216113520407 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0508493326049 0.0766984524023 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0357273417551 0.0603063233224 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.107060065787 0.12726935374 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0179583788325 0.0580467560999 31% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.3 8.37731958763 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 73.17 70.7449484536 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 7.45979381443 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.17 8.71597938144 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.45 7.59969072165 98% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 41.2886597938 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 8.62886597938 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.