In some countries, a few people earn extremely high salaries. Some people think that this is good for a country, while others believe that the government should control salaries and limit the amount people can earn.
Discuss both views and give your opinion.
In Kazakhstan, there is an issue about people, whose income is exceptionally larger than the average one. Some politicians claim that it is beneficial for society while some economists say that their income should be under governmental regulation. This essay will discuss both points of view and agrees with the idea of regulating these incomes.
The reason why large salaries bring benefits to the government is that people with that much income pay much higher taxes. This revenue from taxation could go directly to maintain many areas of social life, such as building roads, paying extra money to teachers, offering medical treatment with discount, allocating more scholarships and assisting jobless people. For example, in Europe, people, who earn more than one hundred thousand euros a year, are obliged to pay more than fifty percent of it to the government, which uses it to support unemployed people and give a scholarship to children from disadvantaged families, so that they feel necessary to the public.
However, some economists think that the government ought to take control of high incomes. Resentments in society for inequality are the main reason for this opinion. The amount of money rich people spend has always caused dissatisfaction in lower classes of society. This situation sometimes leads to open protest against wealthy people. For example, in Kazakhstan, the main motivations, why people commit a crime, are both envy and the desire of becoming as rich as their victims, who have exceptionally large salaries.
In conclusion, after analyzing, it is clear that even though uncommonly high wages have some positive effects on economy, a sense of equality is more essential in a stable community, because people, who do earn little money, might get enraged once they see how rich people squander fabulous sums of money on luxury things.
- The younger generation is mainly responsible for latest technological developments How far do you agree 78
- Nowadays we are producing more and more rubbish.Why do you think this is happening?What can governments do to help reduce the amount of rubbish produced? 73
- All over the world societies are facing a growing problem with obesity This problem affects both children and adults What are the reasons for this rise in obesity 84
- Most artists earn low salaries and therefore should receive findings from the government in order for them to continue with their work.To what extent do you agree? 73
- Due to the development and rapid expansion of supermarkets in some countries, many small, local businesses are unable to compete. Some people think that the closure of local business bring about the death of local communities.To what extent do you agree o 67
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... the idea of regulating these incomes. The reason why large salaries bring bene...
^^^
Line 4, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...hat they feel necessary to the public. However, some economists think that the ...
^^^
Line 6, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...who have exceptionally large salaries. In conclusion, after analyzing, it is cl...
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, so, while, for example, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1571.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 299.0 315.596192385 95% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.25418060201 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1583189471 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72747755086 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 187.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.625418060201 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 494.1 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 84.5998752297 49.4020404114 171% => OK
Chars per sentence: 130.916666667 106.682146367 123% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.9166666667 20.7667163134 120% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.91666666667 7.06120827912 70% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.273951993081 0.244688304435 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.091104892258 0.084324248473 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0500145224743 0.0667982634062 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.150698829541 0.151304729494 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.054277554083 0.056905535591 95% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.8 13.0946893788 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.66 50.2224549098 77% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.47 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.21 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 78.4519038076 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
---------------------
Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
---------------------
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.