A person’s salary defines not only based on who is paying them but also nature work and qualification, even though government can impose different level of taxes on remuneration such as income tax, National Labor support tax in addition to that, they are not allowed to get any subsidies from co-operative societies or any other governing bodies of nation. So that all nations could balance the social and economical structure for the nation’s equality and unity.
Obviously, the people who gets extremely high salaries are asset of the country and, that does not mean that it is getting free from any company or a government moreover, remuneration is purely based on the eligibility, risk and ability to handle the position for example, the person who sits in a higher management of company or any governing body must get good payment because their analytical skills and decisions reflect the company’s or society’s performance and future.
However, controlling the salaries or put a cap on the remuneration of those who are working in organization or big concern those who control either by government or any management could make a negative impact on the people who have higher education level or ability to handle any hazardous situation. Alternatively, government needs to act to control the financial equality and stability of the people whereas the people who gets high wages should expel from countries discounted distribution system like reduction in groceries, fuel, medical, education.
Overall, financial and social equality of the people are very important for a healthy nation subsequently everyone will be happy and live Longley.
- In some cultures children are often told that they can achieve anything if they try hard enough What are the advantages and disadvantages of giving children this message 56
- University students should pay all the costs of their studies because university education benefits only individuals but not the society as a whole To what extent do you agree or disagree 84
- The office where you work does not have a proper car park Write a letter to your manager and say Explain the problem of no parking space available Suggest a solution for the car park problem Explain how this will help your company 73
- Some people spend a lot of money for their wedding ceremonies However others feel like it is unnecessary to spend a lot Discuss both viewpoints and give your own opinion 76
- Planting trees is important is very important for the environment Some people says trees should be planted in vacant areas of cities and towns while others says housing facilities should be build instead Do you agree or disagree 84
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 412, Rule ID: ECONOMICAL_ECONOMIC[1]
Message: Did you mean 'economic' (=connected with economy)?
Suggestion: economic
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Line 1, column 475, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...r the nation's equality and unity. Obviously, the people who gets extremely...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ect the company's or society's performance and future. However, cont...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, moreover, so, whereas, for example, in addition, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 10.4138276553 182% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 10.0 24.0651302605 42% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 41.998997996 62% => OK
Nominalization: 20.0 8.3376753507 240% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1413.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 263.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.37262357414 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02706775958 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.04289429878 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 159.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.604562737643 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 465.3 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 4.76152304609 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 16.0721442886 37% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 43.0 20.2975951904 212% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 126.856108336 49.4020404114 257% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 235.5 106.682146367 221% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 43.8333333333 20.7667163134 211% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 13.3333333333 7.06120827912 189% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.164579467044 0.244688304435 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0864570637344 0.084324248473 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0447866459859 0.0667982634062 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.101041690496 0.151304729494 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0396523234767 0.056905535591 70% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 25.8 13.0946893788 197% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 10.91 50.2224549098 22% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 14.6 7.44779559118 196% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 22.4 11.3001002004 198% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.75 12.4159519038 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.27 8.58950901804 120% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 78.4519038076 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 19.5 9.78957915832 199% => OK
gunning_fog: 19.2 10.1190380762 190% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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