Many people believe that having a fixed punishment for all crimes is more efficien.
What are the advantages and disadvantages of having a fixed punishment?
It is quite difficult to choose the right penalty for breaking an order. Some politicians state that the government should adopt the legal system with fixed punishment. This essay will consider both pros and cons of this penalisation.
Let us start with the positive effects of fixed punishment. The first advantage is that criminals will receive the same punishment for a certain crime. All people, no matter circumstances, will be punished equally if they commit, for example, a pickpocketing. Another benefit is that there is no need for trial. The check of evidence is not required, since the accused will immediately be found guilty and get penalty. Furthermore, it saves money on judges, juries and lawyers. The authority can dismiss all the participants of court, which means that it will have no need to pay them salaries.
Despite the above mentioned merits, this type of judicial body has a few demerits. Firstly, It is unfair to criminals under special circumstances. Some offenders break a law because of being driven either poverty or self-defense, so it will be unjust to punish them with serious felons. Secondly, many innocent citizens will be found guilty. Since there is no justice investigation, most sinless people will service their sentences in prison before the police find the true criminal. Moreover, the judiciary will be inconsistent with the global standards. The country will have problems with foreigners, as the justice system in their home country may demand for trial with judges and lawyers prior to penalizing according to the local judicial authority.
In conclusion, although inflexible sentencehas a great deal of positive sides, it also causes many problems for the government.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, furthermore, if, may, moreover, second, secondly, so, for example, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 7.85571142285 191% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1451.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 275.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.27636363636 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07223819929 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86363116883 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 176.0 176.041082164 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.64 0.561755894193 114% => OK
syllable_count: 445.5 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 38.0665434259 49.4020404114 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 80.6111111111 106.682146367 76% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.2777777778 20.7667163134 74% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.66666666667 7.06120827912 80% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 3.9879759519 251% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.177245922577 0.244688304435 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0493021512089 0.084324248473 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0517571192892 0.0667982634062 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0987159970856 0.151304729494 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.060381451369 0.056905535591 106% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 13.0946893788 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 50.2224549098 112% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.75 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.26 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 78.4519038076 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.78957915832 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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