In many countries children spend long hours on homework. Some people think that less homework can reduce students stress and give them a chance to develop other skills. What is your opinion about this?
We can see there are numerous countries in which young students have to do assignments apart from schools and this work consumes lots of time.it is believed by some people that ĺeast homework should be given to the children so that they can brush up their other expertise. I completely agree with the statement of assigning less home work to the kids.
Children should be given less task to do at home because it can lead to be sharpen their perfections that are apart from study and they can get relaxation as well. Young students can improve their expertise in games. By giving time to sports activities, they can not only make themselves physically fit but also build their career in sports. For instance, sachin tendulkar, who is god of cricket, used to focus on his game instead of home work.
In addition to this, kids cannot enjoy their childhood properly by doing duty of study at their residence. The reason behind not relishing their early day of life is that they pay out most of time to task that is given by school teachers. This time can be used for exploring their golden days of childhood.
To conclude, i support that children should be given less assignments for home so that they can balance their school and personal life by doing some physically activities and they can also enjoy their primary day of life.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, well, apart from, for instance, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 24.0651302605 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1113.0 1615.20841683 69% => OK
No of words: 235.0 315.596192385 74% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.73617021277 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.91531732006 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.39830179847 2.80592935109 85% => OK
Unique words: 130.0 176.041082164 74% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.553191489362 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 329.4 506.74238477 65% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 66.4145315424 49.4020404114 134% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.3 106.682146367 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.5 20.7667163134 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.2 7.06120827912 88% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.139679750285 0.244688304435 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0605998126273 0.084324248473 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0552620789005 0.0667982634062 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.10010514501 0.151304729494 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0553851409439 0.056905535591 97% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 13.0946893788 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 65.05 50.2224549098 130% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.51 12.4159519038 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.46 8.58950901804 87% => OK
difficult_words: 40.0 78.4519038076 51% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 9.78957915832 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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