The table below describes the percentage of home schooled students in some country in 1999 2004

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The table below describes the percentage of home schooled students in some country in 1999-2004.

The table shown compares the percentage of five grades of home schooled students in some country between 1999 to 2004.

From the table, one can notice that there were similarities between kindergarden and grades 3-4 students where both levels had the same increasing population threads from 1999 to 2004. In addition, the student grades 7-8 have the same number of population in the first three years, which was 1.6% from 1999 to 2001 then the remaining three years were also a rising thread from 2.2 to 2.5%

On the other hand, the home schooled students population grades...

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the student grades 7-8 have
the student in grades 7-8 have

the home schooled students population grades 1-2 and 5-6
the home schooled students in grades 1-2 and 5-6

both level went increase to
both level increased to

Sentence: From the table, one can notice that there were similarities between kindergarden and grades 3-4 students where both levels had the same increasing population threads from 1999 to 2004.
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