some people migrate one country to another and adapt its culture. Do you think it is more negative effects than positive.
In the salad days of millennium, few echelons move from one nation to another and adapt its country culture. I agree this notion that this thing has more harmful effects. Which I will scrutinize in the successive fragments.
To embark with, a number of reasons claim that adapt other nation culture has many negative effects. The main one is that if people adapt another country culture then they may forget their own culture and this thing has directly affect their children, they may not love their own culture and may change their religion.The another reason is that people also forget their mother tongue language if they adapt other country culture. Also, their own culture population may be decreased if they adapt other country culture.
However, there are also some positive aspect that if people move other country and adapt its culture then they can easily interact with its locals and gain knowledge and experience, which give a lot of benefits to their future. Apart from this, if people adapt other country culture then they give respect to the local masses and also they easily survive their.
In conclusion, no doubt it gives many benefits to people but I think this thing has many harmful effects like they may forget their own culture.
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Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 13.1623246493 30% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 24.0651302605 141% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 16.0 41.998997996 38% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1056.0 1615.20841683 65% => OK
No of words: 212.0 315.596192385 67% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.98113207547 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.81578560438 4.20363070211 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.17589385356 2.80592935109 78% => OK
Unique words: 104.0 176.041082164 59% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.490566037736 0.561755894193 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 326.7 506.74238477 64% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0721442886 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 83.1844596123 49.4020404114 168% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.333333333 106.682146367 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.5555555556 20.7667163134 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.22222222222 7.06120827912 131% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.234966596862 0.244688304435 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.108566054817 0.084324248473 129% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0664458260002 0.0667982634062 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.152579683382 0.151304729494 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.026753048109 0.056905535591 47% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 50.2224549098 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.9 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.76 8.58950901804 90% => OK
difficult_words: 40.0 78.4519038076 51% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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