The charts below show household spending patterns in two countries between 1990 and 2008
Funds spent by a family in 2 nations for a 28-year period commenced from 1980 can be seen from the pie chart, and this is grouped into 5 categories.
Initially,the biggest outcomes expended both Britain and New Zealander families were for leisure, utility bills, food and drink which was accumulated over 74 %. However, 9 %, the least percentage, was belonged to others for expenses incurred and transport was ranked in fourth at roughly twice higher of the proportion than the aforementioned figure in these countries.
By 2008, the percentage of leisure, utility bills and others had been experienced an upward for British families while the other necessities has showed a reverse. Being higher between 3 % and 1 %, New Zealander households had seen a rise trend for utility bills, transport and others. By contrast, a decline had been witnessed by other figures.
Overall, majority people expended their money for recreation, utility payment, and nourishment not only in Britain but also in New Zealand. Nevertheless, these expenditures had changed based on their needs throughout the period
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, nevertheless, so, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.0 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 6.8 132% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 20.0 33.7804878049 59% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 933.0 965.302439024 97% => OK
No of words: 173.0 196.424390244 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.39306358382 4.92477711251 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.62669911048 3.73543355544 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.91200054929 2.65546596893 110% => OK
Unique words: 120.0 106.607317073 113% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.693641618497 0.547539520022 127% => OK
syllable_count: 275.4 283.868780488 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.482926829268 414% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 22.4926829268 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.6733256691 43.030603864 101% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.625 112.824112599 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.625 22.9334400587 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.375 5.23603664747 103% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 1.69756097561 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 0.0 3.70975609756 0% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.09268292683 195% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0551935512695 0.215688989381 26% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0237409941533 0.103423049105 23% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0335364789574 0.0843802449381 40% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0305458495166 0.15604864568 20% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0364666739568 0.0819641961636 44% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.8 13.2329268293 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 61.2550243902 82% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.3012195122 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.98 11.4140731707 122% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.33 8.06136585366 116% => OK
difficult_words: 51.0 40.7170731707 125% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 11.4329268293 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.9970731707 95% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 11.0658536585 136% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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