The charts show how tourism to two countries changed over a 50 year period.
The four circular charts illustrate that the changes in the number of Australia and Germany tourists to four different nations between 1960 and 2010.
Overall, it can be incurred that Australia travellers were more preferred europe country but after that this trend changed in asian nation. And the germany tourists liked to travel in all four regions.
Firstly, the Europe country percent were highest in both Australia and germany tourism it was 52% and 46% in 1960. The germany and Australia traveller percentage were equal in america and britain it was 25% . Whereas, in U.S.A. the australian tourism was 12% and in the britain germany traveller was 20% . The ratio of both countries traveller were constant in asia it showed at 10%.
Secondly, in 2010 the germany tourists were travel 40%in europe but, it was a very small number as Australia traveller. The australia and germany travellers ratio were 63% and 25%in asia respectively. In britain and america the australia tourists were 20% and 7% but in germany travellers it trend was opposite it was 6% and 29%.
- The diagram shows the process of making soft cheese 56
- The charts show how tourism to two countries changed over a 50 year period. 67
- As a result of advances in medical care, the average life expectancy for both men and women is increasing. Do you think most of people see this positive delepment. What are the advantages of an aging population for individual and society. 61
- Today children are living under more pressure from the society than the children in the past. To what extent do you agree or disagree. 56
- Some people prefer to spend their lives doing the same things and avoid changes. Others, however, think that change is always a good thing. Discuss both sides these views and give your own opinion 56
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...20% and 7% but in germany travellers it trend was opposite it was 6% and 29%.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, whereas
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 7.0 214% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 6.8 235% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 11.0 5.60731707317 196% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 22.0 33.7804878049 65% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 898.0 965.302439024 93% => OK
No of words: 178.0 196.424390244 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.04494382022 4.92477711251 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.65262427087 3.73543355544 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55267954109 2.65546596893 96% => OK
Unique words: 86.0 106.607317073 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.483146067416 0.547539520022 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 262.8 283.868780488 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.33902439024 138% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 22.4926829268 76% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 27.444671614 43.030603864 64% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.8 112.824112599 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.8 22.9334400587 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.0 5.23603664747 95% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 1.69756097561 295% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.09268292683 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0769799240188 0.215688989381 36% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.040125792207 0.103423049105 39% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0424688428752 0.0843802449381 50% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0589811508424 0.15604864568 38% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0354720398401 0.0819641961636 43% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 13.2329268293 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 61.2550243902 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.3012195122 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.66 11.4140731707 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.12 8.06136585366 101% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 40.7170731707 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 11.4329268293 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.9970731707 80% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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