Technology had made recreational activities like listening music or watching films easier. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this?
Listening to music or watching films had become relatively easy, with the rapid development of technology in the 21st century. Today, people can get a hold of portable entertainment devices easily. Some people claim that it is beneficial to use them while others argue that they have several drawbacks. The arguments on both sides of this issue will be examined carefully in this essay.
On one hand, digital devices have a great variety of benefits. To begin with, these gadgets have versatile functions, from playing games to listening to music while walking down busy streets. Secondly, they are incredibly lightweight and portable to use. For example, if students did not complete their homework before class, they can carry their laptops on trains or cars and work on the go. These devices allow people greater flexibility and ease.
On the other hand, there are numerous drawbacks to electronic gadgets. Firstly, there is no doubt that a rise in patients with eyesight problems, headaches, and back problems are due to the devices. They are major contributors to disease nowadays because people spend hours staring at a screen. Moreover, a growing number of individuals watch TV while eating, and neglect the need of exercise. This has increased the number of people with obesity. Furthermore, electronic devices have made people socially isolated. People usually spend time indoors creating a virtual persona and befriending superficial online friends. Also, they do not know the activities happening outside, so the art of physical communication has deteriorated.
In conclusion, I believe there are more drawbacks than benefits in the later future. From my perspective, I believe the gen-z and millennial population may face life-threatening problems if they do not limit themselves from the devices
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, furthermore, if, may, moreover, second, secondly, so, while, for example, in conclusion, no doubt, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1538.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 286.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.37762237762 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11236361783 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85284689223 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 185.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.646853146853 0.561755894193 115% => OK
syllable_count: 481.5 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 29.0507245751 49.4020404114 59% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 80.9473684211 106.682146367 76% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.0526315789 20.7667163134 72% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.31578947368 7.06120827912 118% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.114310642152 0.244688304435 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.031395897545 0.084324248473 37% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0609015008657 0.0667982634062 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0663198359259 0.151304729494 44% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0661929808192 0.056905535591 116% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 13.0946893788 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 47.79 50.2224549098 95% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.33 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.4 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 91.0 78.4519038076 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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