Some people say that nowadays children have too much freedom. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
youngsters are believed to have too much allowance to freely behave as they like. I totally agree to this view since I think parents and schools should impose better discipline on children for their protection and development.
At school, that children are less controlled makes it incredibly dangerous. Teachers have been undermined in authority as they had been in the past, they could not put physical punishment on students for example. this leads to pupils’ bad behavior, lessons are sometimes disrupted by students shouting, chatting and using mobile phones. When sitting exams, they may fail to make the grade and fall behind their studies by the virtue of the former unpunishment. Therefore, schoolchildren should be given less freedom to maintain the standard of education.
On the other hand, lacking of parental involvement is a serious factor that gives children chances to commit crimes. Within bringing up, parents had been overprotective, but at recent they give their offspring more self-decision in using money as well as the Internet. For instance, in Vietnam, we might see more and more children at the lower ages than before playing video games overnight and accessing such unsuitable website without supervision. Lax control during formative years extremely create negative patterns of behavior for infants. While youngsters should have some freedom of choice, they must be enforced with strict rules to form wonderful physical and mental health.
In conclusion, children today have been easily permitted to do whatever they wish and behave however they want at school and in the home.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, may, so, therefore, well, while, for example, for instance, i think, in conclusion, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1379.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 254.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.42913385827 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.99216450694 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77258451169 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.673228346457 0.561755894193 120% => OK
syllable_count: 408.6 506.74238477 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 29.0176440918 49.4020404114 59% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 106.076923077 106.682146367 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.5384615385 20.7667163134 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.76923076923 7.06120827912 138% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.129451355561 0.244688304435 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0454052768432 0.084324248473 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.043012006159 0.0667982634062 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0892176270027 0.151304729494 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0362691918774 0.056905535591 64% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 13.0946893788 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.21 12.4159519038 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.55 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 78.4519038076 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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