computer games and films containing violence are popular today. some people think that these are harmful for our society and the government should ban them.others argue that such games and films are fine for entertainment.
discuss both views and give your opinion.
Many digital technologies have allowed human beings to use their free time playing video games or watching movies which might depict violent scenes. While most of these games and films do not show violence, some of them display explicit images which may not have a good affect on the viewer. In my opinion, if these sources of entertainment have a detrimental impact on the people, then the government should ban them.
Almost everyone has a smartphone or gadget today and hence they are able to actively utilize these devices to enjoy their leisure time or even when they are busy. As a result of this, they often waste a lot of effort which they could have used otherwise for societal purposes. In addition, crimes or aggressive behaviour are frequently portrayed on these screens which may effect a person's psychology. Therefore, it has been suggested that governments should ban some of these unwanted or harmful media outlets. However, without these useful time-passers a lot of people will feel unmotivated and hence these should not be prohibited.
On the contrary, studies have shown that consistent exposure to foul language and bad conduct adversely influences people, and they begin to perceive violence as normal. For example, according to a recent study, children who regularly play aggressive video games, tend to be more aggressive and impulsive. Once violence becomes normalized in their psyche, they stop seeing it as a crime. Unfortunately, this gives rise to criminal tendencies
In conclusion, people may have different opinions about the depiction of violence on television and in video games. In my opinion, violent content ought to be censured because it is malicious in nature. in them. I personally think that such programmes need to be regulated since they are detrimental to individuals as well as the society.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: persons'; person's
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
hence, however, if, may, so, then, therefore, well, while, for example, in addition, in conclusion, as a result, as well as, in my opinion, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1557.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 299.0 315.596192385 95% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.20735785953 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1583189471 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76950542318 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 185.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.61872909699 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 497.7 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.0127757375 49.4020404114 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.214285714 106.682146367 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.3571428571 20.7667163134 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.0714285714 7.06120827912 157% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.9879759519 226% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.192582309309 0.244688304435 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0655961802385 0.084324248473 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0504476558429 0.0667982634062 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.105763961953 0.151304729494 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0442947608604 0.056905535591 78% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.94 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.59 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 93.0 78.4519038076 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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