I partially agree with the statement that some of the most novel and unique idea come into our minds in the most humdrum situations. It is largely accepted that ideas come into a person's mind in the most unexpected way and scenario. It can click into your mind anytime. It could strike you while you are sleeping just by closing your eyes or during watching a movie or during cooking or in any other way. The key is that you are thriving for it or not. If a person is looking into such mundane works with a novel and fresh perspectives, he could surely think of some aberrant ideas which could turn into the best ones also. Although it is a little extreme to think that all the best ideas come in such situations only.
This blanket statement will obviously pay its dividends to situations when a creative perception plays an outstanding role. For example, every one was cognizant about steam. It was a platitude for every one to see steam but James Watt saw it as something very out of the box phenomenon and used its function in making steam engine. Therefore, it depends on the outlook of a person how he see things and works with them. Things that are so quotidian for everyone else turn out be a boon for someone with innovative thinking.
To expand on this point, I would like to mention the time when everyone could see that apple falls from the tree. Although no one would have ever tried to waste there time to think about the reason which makes it fall until Newton saw it and used his passionate love for physics and gave us the revolutionary theory of gravitational force. Such a prodigious thinking and aberrant view point always depicts the best idea.
To use a function of normal or banal objects or situations in the most unique form is a very insightful thinking. To bring out best from waste, to recycle what we already have, to use solar energy for generating electricity and many more examples are there which bring a very unique thought process inside us and make us think that every solution for any type of problem is in front of our eyes only, its just that it is unobtrusive.
Although, there are some cases where ideas come with hardwork and continuous reflecting about the same topic with different possibilities. But, it is true that most of the best ideas come when we think of making use of simple thing in the most aberrant and radical manner. The idea of Facebook came in the mind of Mark Zuckerburg just by the thought by which he could use internet to unite his friends and become more social.
Clearly, it is evident that most of the revolutionary thought process come into our mind in most banal situations. When we are passionate enough to work in a certain field and thrive for betterment then we can see a hope in every simple things that we go through in our lives. And most of the pioneering ideas come in that process.
- Claim: In any field—business, politics, education, government—those in power should step down after five years.Reason: The surest path to success for any enterprise is revitalization through new leadership. 58
- Claim: An piece of information referred to as a fact should be mistrusted, since it may well be proven false in the future.Reason: Much of the information that people assume is factual turns out be inaccurate. 66
- Universities should require students to take courses only within those fields they are interested in studying. 66
- Claim: Even though young people often receive the advice to “follow your dreams,” more emphasis should be placed on picking worthy goals. Reason: Many people’s dreams are inherently selfish.Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which 50
- People's attitudes are determined more by their immediate situation or surroundings than by society as a whole.Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reas 66
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
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Message: 'Also' is not used at the end of the sentence. Use 'as well' instead.
Suggestion: as well
...eas which could turn into the best ones also. Although it is a little extreme to thi...
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Message: “Although” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...ich could turn into the best ones also. Although it is a little extreme to think that al...
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Message: Use simply 'unique'.
Suggestion: unique
...l or banal objects or situations in the most unique form is a very insightful thinking. To ...
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Message: Use simply 'unique'.
Suggestion: unique
...y more examples are there which bring a very unique thought process inside us and make us t...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ore social. Clearly, it is evident that most of the revolutionary thought proces...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, look, so, then, therefore, while, for example, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 19.5258426966 92% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 12.4196629213 81% => OK
Conjunction : 22.0 14.8657303371 148% => OK
Relative clauses : 21.0 11.3162921348 186% => OK
Pronoun: 55.0 33.0505617978 166% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 71.0 58.6224719101 121% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 12.9106741573 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2347.0 2235.4752809 105% => OK
No of words: 519.0 442.535393258 117% => OK
Chars per words: 4.52215799615 5.05705443957 89% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.7730044521 4.55969084622 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.42329162943 2.79657885939 87% => OK
Unique words: 244.0 215.323595506 113% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.470134874759 0.4932671777 95% => OK
syllable_count: 751.5 704.065955056 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.59117977528 88% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 6.24550561798 192% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.99550561798 40% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.10617977528 129% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.38483146067 114% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 20.2370786517 114% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 23.0359550562 96% => OK
Sentence length SD: 60.3626407076 60.3974514979 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.043478261 118.986275619 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.5652173913 23.4991977007 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.13043478261 5.21951772744 60% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.97078651685 121% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 7.80617977528 77% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 10.2758426966 136% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 5.13820224719 19% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.83258426966 166% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.178095380076 0.243740707755 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0533531961214 0.0831039109588 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0488020423839 0.0758088955206 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0853019971074 0.150359130593 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0541508539044 0.0667264976115 81% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 14.1392134831 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 66.07 48.8420337079 135% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 12.1743820225 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.23 12.1639044944 76% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.56 8.38706741573 90% => OK
difficult_words: 93.0 100.480337079 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 11.8971910112 63% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 11.2143820225 96% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.7820224719 68% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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