The opinions of celebrities, such as famous entertainers and athletes, are more important to younger people than they are to older people.
With the development of the Internet and mobile phone, delivering information to people is very easy, especially the advertisement, which appears in every area around the world. The appearance frequency of famous people is increasing greatly by advert. Therefore, the influence of celebrities is raising gradually and tremendous now. Under this circumstance, people be affected by renowned people inevitably. In my point of view, the youth is influenced more deeply than older people.
Younger people have more chance access to well-known starts. The majority client of Internet is youngsters and young people spend more time on mobile phone looking through webs and videos than old people. The advertising or TV series of famous people can leave impressive impression to people. Taking my sister and my father as example, my father read news using computer and he pay tiny attention to the events of entertainment starts. However, popular famous people show and programs cost most of my sister’s time of using computer and she is very familiar with these entertainers. Looking more frequently, effects is more deeply. That is the reason that the altitude of famous people is more important to my sister than to my father.
The age of most entertainment starts and athletes is closer to young people than to old people. People will have same interests and habits in the same age stage. So, younger people are willing to take the well-known people who have same age as their model. For me, I take JieXian, a skier as well as a champion, as my study model. I appreciate his spirit of never giving up. But, when I talk to my mom about this young athletic start, she thinks the young boy is childish and lovely. My mother does not agree little children have ability to influence my idea as well as she thinks the opinion of them is not important to her. This is the gap caused by age, which also the reason that old people take young starts’ opinions as no sense.
Older people have rich experience that they have strong believe in their own opinion. They seldom accept anyone’s suggestion not mention the famous people that old people not familiar with. But young people have not getting though many things and they have not building their belief. Therefore, they accept opinion of other people easier, especially the well-known starts that young people favor.
We cannot deny that celebrities have deeper influence on young people than old people. But, it is not a bad thing because many famous people encourage a generation people and teach them wisdom of life.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 13, column 57, Rule ID: BELIEVE_BELIEF[1]
Message: Did you mean 'belief' (noun) instead of believe (verb)?
Suggestion: belief
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, look, so, therefore, well, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 15.1003584229 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 9.8082437276 31% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 13.8261648746 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.0286738351 100% => OK
Pronoun: 43.0 43.0788530466 100% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 52.1666666667 84% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.0752688172 186% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2167.0 1977.66487455 110% => OK
No of words: 432.0 407.700716846 106% => OK
Chars per words: 5.0162037037 4.8611393121 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.55901411391 4.48103885553 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60922245854 2.67179642975 98% => OK
Unique words: 213.0 212.727598566 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.493055555556 0.524837075471 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 663.3 618.680645161 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.59856630824 115% => OK
Article: 7.0 3.08781362007 227% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 26.0 20.6003584229 126% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.1344086022 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 32.1916413864 48.9658058833 66% => OK
Chars per sentence: 83.3461538462 100.406767564 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.6153846154 20.6045352989 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.34615384615 5.45110844103 43% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 11.8709677419 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.88709677419 143% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.325896782053 0.236089414692 138% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.100679897976 0.076458572812 132% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0663625637104 0.0737576698707 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.193814480074 0.150856017488 128% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0403620484245 0.0645574589148 63% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.5 11.7677419355 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 58.1214874552 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 10.1575268817 83% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.54 10.9000537634 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.83 8.01818996416 98% => OK
difficult_words: 93.0 86.8835125448 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 10.002688172 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.0537634409 84% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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