Human Characteristics
Plenty of human characteristics such as art and its appreciate, language, thinking and so on comparing animals have been represented by scientists, archaeologists and anthologist. In my opinion these diversities have been obviously illustrated by art and varies languages.
Regarding latest researches by Stanford University’s scholars, art may be the key clue. The first arts have been begun by humans as the cave graffiti approximately 70,000 to 90,000 years ago. Art as an primary amusement not only had accomplished our ancestors’ leisure time, but their creativity and comprehension of surroundings had been profoundly impressed. Although, scientists have proved that a kind of monkeys (Chimpanzees) has capability to draw on the piece of paper, however their paintings were devoid of world inspiring and creativity which both are human specifications uniquely. In addition early paintings by our predecessors had been fictional to transfer their information such as life, hunting and fighting methods to the next descendants.
Language has shown a significant discrepancy amid human and animals. Numerous assumption have endeavored to figure out language creation history and archaeologists have explored ancient fossils bones, which had been possessed our early ancestors and were surprisingly distinct to answer our questions. The key clue has been appeared in our throat bones. Larynx.in both human and animals were placed originally high in the throat, however, it had moved lower in the throat about 200,000 years ago and this lowering provided a larger sound chamber in which crossing air could be control by tongue and rhythmic speech possibility has been launched as one of the most real human and animal differences.
In conclusion, though, several diversity have been counted as human and animal discrimination, meanwhile, both language and art had been the most remarkable specifications of our race constantly.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'Regarding the latest'.
Suggestion: Regarding the latest
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Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: addition,
...h are human specifications uniquely. In addition early paintings by our predecessors had...
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Message: Possible agreement error. The noun diversity seems to be countable; consider using: 'several diversities'.
Suggestion: several diversities
...ifferences. In conclusion, though, several diversity have been counted as human and animal d...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, if, may, regarding, so, while, in addition, in conclusion, kind of, such as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 10.5418719212 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 6.10837438424 33% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 8.36945812808 203% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 4.0 5.94088669951 67% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 20.9802955665 71% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 31.9359605911 103% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 5.75862068966 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1660.0 1207.87684729 137% => OK
No of words: 292.0 242.827586207 120% => OK
Chars per words: 5.68493150685 5.00649968141 114% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13376432452 3.92707691288 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.27430931953 2.71678728327 121% => OK
Unique words: 178.0 139.433497537 128% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.609589041096 0.580463131201 105% => OK
syllable_count: 498.6 379.143842365 132% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 4.6157635468 22% => OK
Article: 2.0 1.56157635468 128% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.65517241379 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6551724138 95% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.5024630542 117% => OK
Sentence length SD: 80.8360824275 50.4703680194 160% => OK
Chars per sentence: 138.333333333 104.977214359 132% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.3333333333 20.9669160288 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.25 7.25397266985 128% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.33497536946 75% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 6.9802955665 86% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 2.75862068966 72% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 2.91625615764 137% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.171107796425 0.242375264174 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0661663050732 0.0925447433944 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0772008986826 0.071462118173 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.110908306595 0.151781067708 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0382268418369 0.0609392437508 63% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.5 12.6369458128 138% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.66 53.1260098522 73% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.54236453202 171% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 10.9458128079 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.96 11.5310837438 138% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.29 8.32886699507 124% => OK
difficult_words: 101.0 55.0591133005 183% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.94827586207 106% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.3980295567 112% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.5123152709 114% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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