It is argued that the idea of way of life as believed by old folks of our society is inept and lacking when faced with the challenges of modern times. This essay agrees with the above notion . Firstly, this essay will discuss how some conventional beliefs about family life have been found to be ineffectual in today's world. Secondly, this essay will expose how the strict roles given to each sex do not bode well with contemporary lifestyle.
In earlier times, it was believed that men and women should marry within their own community, race, or caste so that the couple would have similarities to lead a happy life together. But this model has been rejected by young people. Nowadays, we see many interracial couples joining in the bond of marriage and living fruitful lives. This is evident by the fact that many marriages that were arranged on the basis of caste and creed have met their fate in divorce courts.
Traditional views of society tend to denote strict roles to each gender. Women were only allowed to restrict themselves to the matters of the household and not venture out into the world to earn a livelihood whhich was the responsibility of the man. This old fashioned vies has been challenged time and again as more and more women find themselves reaching the echelons of society where only men used to traverse. There are countless examples of woman power, the foremost that comes to mind is that of Indira Nooyi, CEO of PEPSI company, who had shown to the world that women can achieve that which most men cannot.
In conclusion, this essay reiterates that the stereotypical thinking of yesteryears about the actions and behaviour of men and women have been proved to be incompetent in modern times.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, well, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 7.30460921844 192% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 8.3376753507 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1429.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 298.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.79530201342 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15483772266 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.48584768414 2.80592935109 89% => OK
Unique words: 177.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.593959731544 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 448.2 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.6305799029 49.4020404114 102% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.923076923 106.682146367 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.9230769231 20.7667163134 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.07692307692 7.06120827912 72% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.119040073067 0.244688304435 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0413189758864 0.084324248473 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0375656472314 0.0667982634062 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0721164139593 0.151304729494 48% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0408345990831 0.056905535591 72% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 13.0946893788 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 50.2224549098 115% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.86 12.4159519038 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.97 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 78.4519038076 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.