In many developing countries, there is a problem with a declining quality of air and water from both industry and construction. What measures could be taken to prevent this?
Vietnam is a developing country, like every developing country, Vietnam has a problem which is balance between economic development and nature protected.
We have an example is Hanoi which is Vietnam capital and fast development city. In Hanoi, we easy to see the tower or street that is being built. Every day, when I go to the work place and come back home after work time I have a serious problem that is dust and pollution air. We have a another problem that is not enough clean water. In country we have problems about protected rivers, forests, sea .. nearby development economic and society. I think we must have measures to solve this problem.
We have to control building new building and new factory. Such as, centre Hanoi is have so many building and we must bar new tower. In big cities we will control and limit private transportation and develop public transport because most waste air of transportation make pollution air.
Another measures is protect nature and plant new forest. Forest and plants are very important for environment because like we know most of waste air, carbonic is absorbed by plants and help us to control and decrease global warming.
We must have protected environment tax, everybody will must pay money when they use single use plastics, buy gasoline or litter. This money will use for replant the forest, refresh air, refresh the river and develop recycle energy.
After all pollution air and water is serious problem and we don’t have time for delay to rescue our earth.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
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Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 10.4138276553 173% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 18.0 41.998997996 43% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1284.0 1615.20841683 79% => OK
No of words: 258.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.97674418605 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.00778971557 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.49517654571 2.80592935109 89% => OK
Unique words: 143.0 176.041082164 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.554263565891 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 400.5 506.74238477 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 41.2185012312 49.4020404114 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 80.25 106.682146367 75% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.125 20.7667163134 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.9375 7.06120827912 27% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.38176352705 137% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.144389711554 0.244688304435 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0574131971726 0.084324248473 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0369810368923 0.0667982634062 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.078140138235 0.151304729494 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0317477219283 0.056905535591 56% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.1 13.0946893788 77% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 50.2224549098 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.31 12.4159519038 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.61 8.58950901804 89% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 78.4519038076 66% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.33 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.