You recently went shopping at the local supermarket, when you got home and studied your bill you found that you had been charged for items you did not purchase. Write a letter to supermarket manager explaining what has happened. Tell the manager how you feel about the error and ask him to do sth. about it.
Dear Sir/Madam,
I am writing to express my concern about charging items I didn’t purchase on bill. I visited our store to the opposite of Grand Hotel on Marble Street to buy 0-5 age boy trousers yesterday. I bought not only trousers but also hat with the aid of helpful sales consultant. If I remember correctly, cashier whose name was John helped me in front of cash desk. They were charged as $53 and paid in cash.
While looking through my receipt today, I noticed trousers and two hats seems to have been sold on the bills, even though I bought trousers and one hat. It seems that I have paid more than it should. If I remember correctly, your cashier’s name was John. Could you calculate the items I bought again and if I paid more, could you refund me exceeds charged?
I will be satisfied if you help me to rectify this mistake I’m looking forward to getting a reply from you.
Thank you for your support.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 196, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
... to buy 0-5 age boy trousers yesterday. I bought not only trousers but also hat w...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, look, so, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 32.9175257732 94% => OK
Preposition: 18.0 26.3917525773 68% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.85567010309 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 781.0 937.175257732 83% => OK
No of words: 169.0 206.0 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.62130177515 4.54256449028 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.60555127546 3.78020617076 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.47591952914 2.54303337028 97% => OK
Unique words: 115.0 127.690721649 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.680473372781 0.622605031667 109% => OK
syllable_count: 225.0 290.88556701 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 1.83505154639 218% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.696378037 44.8134815571 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 71.0 76.5299724578 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.3636363636 16.8248392259 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.72727272727 4.34317383033 63% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.206936880542 0.216113520407 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0816375050399 0.0766984524023 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.109977113718 0.0603063233224 182% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.174082962671 0.12726935374 137% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0951675099417 0.0580467560999 164% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.0 8.37731958763 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 81.63 70.7449484536 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.6 7.45979381443 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.92 8.71597938144 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.46 7.59969072165 98% => OK
difficult_words: 33.0 41.2886597938 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.