Knowing about the past cannot help people to make important decisions today.
The issue of whether knowledge of our past can help us make decisions today or is it a waste of our time is a contentious one. While each side has its strength and weaknesses, I believe that we should be aware of our past because it can help us in not repeating the same mistakes again. Moreover, everything in nature is a cycle and past events can help us predict future events.
First, knowing our past can help us in evading our previous mistakes. For example, in Germany, children are taught in school the atrocities their ancestors committed against the Jews. It serves as a reminder and lesson to them that such deeds should never be repeated.
Second, learning about past events can help us in predicting the future. For example, meteorologists work on discovering past natural events to learn weather patterns from them and use the same knowledge to predict the weather.
Some may argue that the past is irrelevant now and what mattered earlier has no significance in present day. For example, up till a century before, women were not allowed to vote but today this thought wouldn’t even cross anyone’s mind. So, how would learning about women of that era and their struggle matter today? The answer is simple: discrimination still continues today, just in other forms of race, culture, religion divide. Hence, we can all learn from women’s past movement, their struggles and victories to apply the same for today’s fight.
In conclusion, learning about our past can help us in making better, thought out decisions. For these reasons, I believe knowing about our past is crucial to both our present and future.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 151, Rule ID: AFFORD_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the infinitive: 'to weather'
Suggestion: to weather
...iscovering past natural events to learn weather patterns from them and use the same kno...
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Line 13, column 10, Rule ID: MASS_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Possible agreement error - use third-person verb forms for singular and mass nouns: 'argues'.
Suggestion: argues
...e to predict the weather. Some may argue that the past is irrelevant now and wha...
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Line 13, column 262, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'would' requires the base form of the verb: 'learn'
Suggestion: learn
...cross anyone's mind. So, how would learning about women of that era and their strug...
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Line 13, column 314, Rule ID: AFFORD_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the infinitive: 'to matter'
Suggestion: to matter
...ut women of that era and their struggle matter today? The answer is simple: discrimina...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, hence, if, may, moreover, second, so, still, while, for example, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 19.5258426966 51% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 12.4196629213 89% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 14.8657303371 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 11.3162921348 35% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 33.0 33.0505617978 100% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 58.6224719101 75% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 12.9106741573 23% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1382.0 2235.4752809 62% => OK
No of words: 277.0 442.535393258 63% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.98916967509 5.05705443957 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07962216107 4.55969084622 89% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68460528332 2.79657885939 96% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 215.323595506 75% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.581227436823 0.4932671777 118% => OK
syllable_count: 413.1 704.065955056 59% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 6.24550561798 80% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.99550561798 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.38483146067 68% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 20.2370786517 74% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 23.0359550562 78% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 27.468770146 60.3974514979 45% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 92.1333333333 118.986275619 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.4666666667 23.4991977007 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.0 5.21951772744 115% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 7.80617977528 51% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 10.2758426966 68% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 5.13820224719 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.83258426966 83% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.260315553682 0.243740707755 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0964589372818 0.0831039109588 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0715915943547 0.0758088955206 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.151615567356 0.150359130593 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0552914475866 0.0667264976115 83% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 14.1392134831 80% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 48.8420337079 126% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 12.1743820225 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.66 12.1639044944 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.41 8.38706741573 100% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 100.480337079 68% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.8971910112 88% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 11.2143820225 82% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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