These days, people enjoy a lot of time away from their work and school obligations. Many people use this time to visit new places and learn about them. What do you think is the best way to learn about a place you are visiting for the first time?
Today, people have time to visit new places more than in the past. As we see in our society, people have to find somewhere to spend their free time there. I think that a museum is the best choice for filling our times and I have two main reasons for this, which will explore in the following essay.
First, a museum is not just a place for having fun and wasting our day. It is like a big historical class, and if you concentrate and listen, it will teach you many things. You can find out many ideas about the history of your country or society. Those ideas can be very curious. I have a personal example of it. When I was a child, during one of my family trips, my father insisted on going to visit a museum. Although we were tedious, we went to that city’s artificial museum. In that hall, I saw old breathtaking sculptures, and the guide told us attractive circumstances about them like their artists or their ages. For me as a child, visiting that museum was so gratifying, and after that trip, I tried to designate a special day in a month to visit museums.
Second, you can use your free day to go to a mall or playing games in an amusement park, but besides the limit of costs, actually, they will be boring in a very short time. Shopping can satisfy you just for about two hours, and after that, you need to rest; since watching vivid lights and persistent sellers can make your mood hectic. Those big and silence cafes around shopping malls are signs for this claim, and they roll like scape rooms, especially for men. Another reason for this tedious mood is that shopping or gaming are repetitive circulations. Generally, anything that repeats in a human’s life would be tiring for him. However, Watching an ancient pitcher will not be repetitive anytime.
In conclusion, I think that visiting a museum is one of the best ways of spending a free day for two main reasons. You will understand many beautiful stories about humanity’s past, and it would not be monotonous anytime.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, besides, but, first, however, if, second, so, i think, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 10.4613686534 143% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 5.04856512141 257% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 16.0 7.30242825607 219% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 11.0 12.0772626932 91% => OK
Pronoun: 52.0 22.412803532 232% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 42.0 30.3222958057 139% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 5.01324503311 40% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1648.0 1373.03311258 120% => OK
No of words: 362.0 270.72406181 134% => OK
Chars per words: 4.55248618785 5.08290768461 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.36191444098 4.04702891845 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.51965958243 2.5805825403 98% => OK
Unique words: 200.0 145.348785872 138% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.552486187845 0.540411800872 102% => OK
syllable_count: 507.6 419.366225166 121% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.55342163355 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 16.0 3.25607064018 491% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 1.0 8.23620309051 12% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 1.25165562914 320% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 7.0 1.51434878587 462% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 2.5761589404 155% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 13.0662251656 153% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 21.2450331126 85% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 38.5726263042 49.2860985944 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 82.4 110.228320801 75% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.1 21.698381199 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.9 7.06452816374 55% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 4.19205298013 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 4.33554083885 300% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 4.45695364238 22% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.27373068433 140% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.285069940385 0.272083759551 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0799765198743 0.0996497079465 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0645862905271 0.0662205650399 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.182108821242 0.162205337803 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0552162439753 0.0443174109184 125% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.1 13.3589403974 68% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 53.8541721854 130% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 11.0289183223 72% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.81 12.2367328918 72% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.5 8.42419426049 89% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 63.6247240618 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 10.7273730684 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.498013245 88% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.2008830022 71% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 71.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.5 Out of 30
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