The people we work with have many different characteristics and all of them affect the quality of our time at work. Of the following, what do you think is the most important quality for a boss or supervisor to have?
Today, people spend a lot of time in their workplace. they should connect with someone, and obey his or her commands to work better. bosses are the main persons of all kinds of companies, and without them, the company would not survive. In my opinion, a boss should have enough experiences, and it is vital. I think this way because of two main reasons, which will explore in the following essay.
First, an experienced boss destroys obstacles during a project. any kind of project in any field has many obstacles that you can’t predict at the start. A good team with beneficial co-workers and their technical abilities is the project’s fundamentally need, but you need someone to guide your team during hard situations and help your workers to embrace problems in the project. experiences roll like big data in a computer system, they help the system to develop itself and increase the general efficiency of the system. when I was younger, I was working for an engineering company, IDS, where the main field of working was system designing. In one of our projects, we made an enormous mistake that could destroy the project completely. The project was about installing a gigantic turbine in one of the small cities around Tehran. The turbine should be placed very precisely, and our mistake was miscalculating in the turbine dimensions. In that project, we had an experienced boss who had installed many turbines before our project. when I told him our mistake and showed him our calculation, he asked me for taking new measures and compare them with my calculations. After about two weeks, he came to the site and checked new numbers with turbine dimensions. he asked our civil team to open the turbine’s mount and rebuild it with new dimensions. it worked, and we installed that turbine very well. my personal experience is a sign of that claim.
Second, an experienced boss can control the project technically. when you have a complex project with many components and desires, you need experiences to keep you alert. Each branch of your project like financial points, workers, advisors, and timing can easily perplex you. A boss’s experiences help him or her to make everything obvious and manage the project for achieving the last goal.
In conclusion, I think that having experiences is the vital characteristic of a good boss because of two reasons, overcoming the project’s obstacles and managing different components of it.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, second, so, well, i think, in conclusion, kind of, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 10.4613686534 105% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 5.04856512141 238% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 19.0 7.30242825607 260% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 12.0 12.0772626932 99% => OK
Pronoun: 54.0 22.412803532 241% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 50.0 30.3222958057 165% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 5.01324503311 40% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2056.0 1373.03311258 150% => OK
No of words: 408.0 270.72406181 151% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.03921568627 5.08290768461 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.49433085973 4.04702891845 111% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88032537563 2.5805825403 112% => OK
Unique words: 217.0 145.348785872 149% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.531862745098 0.540411800872 98% => OK
syllable_count: 625.5 419.366225166 149% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.55342163355 97% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 3.25607064018 399% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 8.0 8.23620309051 97% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 1.25165562914 320% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 7.0 1.51434878587 462% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 2.5761589404 194% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 24.0 13.0662251656 184% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 21.2450331126 80% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 41.6728120468 49.2860985944 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.6666666667 110.228320801 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.0 21.698381199 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.33333333333 7.06452816374 47% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 4.19205298013 239% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 4.33554083885 208% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 4.45695364238 112% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 10.0 4.27373068433 234% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.212954560546 0.272083759551 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0585267563091 0.0996497079465 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0416576663412 0.0662205650399 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.141315513648 0.162205337803 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0160178322006 0.0443174109184 36% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.8 13.3589403974 81% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 53.8541721854 116% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 5.55761589404 158% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.0289183223 79% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.66 12.2367328918 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.19 8.42419426049 97% => OK
difficult_words: 96.0 63.6247240618 151% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 10.7273730684 51% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.498013245 84% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.2008830022 80% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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