You are going to spend your vacation in a city in a foreign country. You have never been there before. Your cousin has a friend who lives there. Write a letter to the friend. In your letter
• Introduce yourself
• Say why you are making this trip
• Ask some questions about the city (e.g. places to see, things to do, things to bring)
Hi Thomas,
This is Felix, one of the cousins of Patrick. Hope you are doing well. I have planned to visit London for this summer vacation. Since this is my first trip to London, I don't know much about the place. So I asked Patrick for suggestions and he referred you. He told me that you are living in London for many years and would be familiar about the places.
The purpose of my visit is to refresh myself from the work stress which I had in this quarter. I was very much frustrated with the work in the office. So I thought of having a vacation for a week before stepping in to the next quarter. Thus, I planned my trip to London.
I would like to know about the places in the city where I could spend some time to relax myself. Please suggest me some good hotels as I do not know where to stay. Moreover, I need some advises about the things that I suppose to bring with me during the vacation. So that I don't have to buy them in London.
Please do the needful in this regard so that I could book the fight tickets in prior. Meet you in London. Bye.
Best regards,
Felix
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 11, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Hi Thomas, This is Felix, one of the cousins of Pat...
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...ince this is my first trip to London, I dont know much about the place. So I asked P...
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Line 11, column 265, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[3]
Message: “So that” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...e to bring with me during the vacation. So that I dont have to buy them in London. ...
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Line 11, column 275, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
... with me during the vacation. So that I dont have to buy them in London. Please...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, moreover, so, thus, well, i suppose
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 5.05154639175 40% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 3.03092783505 231% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 38.0 32.9175257732 115% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 26.3917525773 129% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 892.0 937.175257732 95% => OK
No of words: 211.0 206.0 102% => OK
Chars per words: 4.22748815166 4.54256449028 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.81127787577 3.78020617076 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.07725718604 2.54303337028 82% => OK
Unique words: 115.0 127.690721649 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.545023696682 0.622605031667 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 267.3 290.88556701 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 12.6804123711 134% => OK
Sentence length: 12.0 16.3608247423 73% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 26.6375128986 44.8134815571 59% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 52.4705882353 76.5299724578 69% => OK
Words per sentence: 12.4117647059 16.8248392259 74% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.47058823529 4.34317383033 57% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 2.54639175258 157% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 7.41237113402 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 10.0 3.94845360825 253% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.129957483184 0.216113520407 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0480590737012 0.0766984524023 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0426964667002 0.0603063233224 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0792340226307 0.12726935374 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0496178941138 0.0580467560999 85% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 4.7 8.37731958763 56% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 84.68 70.7449484536 120% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 4.4 7.45979381443 59% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 6.37 8.71597938144 73% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.7 7.59969072165 88% => OK
difficult_words: 33.0 41.2886597938 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.0 8.62886597938 58% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 6.8 8.54432989691 80% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.