You recently moved to a new address. You want to tell a friend who lives in another city about your new home. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter:
Explain why you moved
Describe your new home
Invite your friend to visit you
Dear friend,
I am writing this letter to let you know that our family had moved to a new home. As a nuclear, family our dream was to own our home. Not only our dream, but also everyone's priority at some point in time.
As you know, we have been living in that rented apartment in new Delhi for more than 5 years. It's a small apartment with constant problems with water supply. we have been suffering in that 2 bedroom home with no space to move around if a friend or family comes.
This new home is a spacious one which can accommodate more than 15 people with 5 bedrooms and an enormous hall. you can play even football in that hall. As you are my only close friend, you are always welcome in this home. I wish you were here when we enter in this new apartment. if possible can you please come over this weekend, so that you can see my home and have a great time together.
Please do come. Waiting for your reply.
Your friend
Don
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 95, Rule ID: IT_IS[17]
Message: Did you mean 'it's' (='it is') instead of 'its' (possessive pronoun)?
Suggestion: It's; It is
...ent in new Delhi for more than 5 years. Its a small apartment with constant problem...
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Line 9, column 159, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: We
...th constant problems with water supply. we have been suffering in that 2 bedroom h...
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Line 13, column 113, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: You
...e with 5 bedrooms and an enormous hall. you can play even football in that hall. As...
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Line 13, column 282, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: If
...re when we enter in this new apartment. if possible can you please come over this ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, as to, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 3.03092783505 231% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 32.0 32.9175257732 97% => OK
Preposition: 19.0 26.3917525773 72% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 780.0 937.175257732 83% => OK
No of words: 181.0 206.0 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.30939226519 4.54256449028 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.66791821706 3.78020617076 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.06533791607 2.54303337028 81% => OK
Unique words: 111.0 127.690721649 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.613259668508 0.622605031667 98% => OK
syllable_count: 235.8 290.88556701 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 1.83505154639 272% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6804123711 110% => OK
Sentence length: 12.0 16.3608247423 73% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 32.7483447159 44.8134815571 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 55.7142857143 76.5299724578 73% => OK
Words per sentence: 12.9285714286 16.8248392259 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.42857142857 4.34317383033 56% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 2.54639175258 157% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.3406449892 0.216113520407 158% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.123245377787 0.0766984524023 161% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.108092077472 0.0603063233224 179% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.148014983679 0.12726935374 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0459061954995 0.0580467560999 79% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 5.3 8.37731958763 63% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 84.68 70.7449484536 120% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 4.4 7.45979381443 59% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 6.83 8.71597938144 78% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 5.98 7.59969072165 79% => OK
difficult_words: 20.0 41.2886597938 48% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 8.62886597938 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 6.8 8.54432989691 80% => OK
text_standard: 6.0 8.15463917526 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.