Famous people sometimes give their opinions on public topics, is this a good thing? Explain to what extent you agree or disagree.
Oftentimes celebrities would speak their views on certain topics, whether it’s on a television show with a famous host or via social media. I believe that it is a positive trend, and here are my reasons.
One belief is that everyone is entitled to express what’s on their minds. After all, it is a society where free speeches are allowed, and shouldn’t be treated any different just because they’re out in the public 24/7. And as there are human beings, obviously they would have various emotions. It can also be a way of communicating with individuals, by combining their thoughts.
Another reason is that quite frequently, this can turn out beneficial as well. for example, the #MeToo movement, which was led by a well-acclaimed actress, jumping out saying that she was sexually harassed by a prominent director. Soon after, more claims were made. As more females had the courage to speak out the unfortunate experiences, not only in America, but also around the world, and in fact, wide-spreading from the acting industry to institutions in South Korea. Several victims showed gratitude towards the actresses, saying that this action gave them the strength to stand up for themselves, to fight for women's rights.
Some people may argue, saying that since they care more about reputations, megastars may say things that aren’t real, but would be beneficial for them.
However, because of the major influence they have, they are able to use that advantage to do something good.
To conclude, if celebrities could speak out more usual thus become a voice for others, they could possibly raise awareness on a certain issue.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, may, so, thus, well, after all, for example, in fact
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1401.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 270.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.18888888889 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05360046442 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83455311434 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 180.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.666666666667 0.561755894193 119% => OK
syllable_count: 421.2 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 6.0 0.809619238477 741% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.0154664088 49.4020404114 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.071428571 106.682146367 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.2857142857 20.7667163134 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.42857142857 7.06120827912 77% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.38176352705 137% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0897204323229 0.244688304435 37% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.028652533984 0.084324248473 34% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.031323411903 0.0667982634062 47% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0429226442911 0.151304729494 28% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0271814605687 0.056905535591 48% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 13.0946893788 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.82 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.79 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 78.4519038076 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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