The volcanic island growth cycle
The diagram presents how a volcanic island is formed. Overall, it is a cyclical process which consists of eight stages.
At the first preshield stage, the volcano pillow, which looks like a small hill, is formed below the sea level. Following this stage, the layered hyaloclaster grows above it. Subsequently, the shield stage, which involves two phases, starts. During the first phase, the growing volcano experiences hydro-explosions and the ash cone forms above the hyaloclaster. At the subaerial phase it is already higher than the water surface, and the smoke after the explosions flows above it. At this phase, the shield is already formed above the ash cone. Next, the shield expands during the postshield stage; cinder cones grow at its upper part. After this step, during the erosion and subsidence stage, coral reefs and sediments are formed along the volcano sides. Having experienced this stage, the volcano enters the rejuvenated stage, when it explodes again, causing lava to flow along the reefs and cinder cone to grow. At the seventh stage, the volcano starts merging back into the water, forming lagoons on the reefs. Finally, the island merges into the sea fully.
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- Some people work for the same organization all their working life. Others think that it is better to work for different organizations. Discuss both of these views and give your opinion 78
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
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Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.0 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 10.0 5.60731707317 178% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 24.0 33.7804878049 71% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 995.0 965.302439024 103% => OK
No of words: 193.0 196.424390244 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.15544041451 4.92477711251 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.72725689877 3.73543355544 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.43145998065 2.65546596893 92% => OK
Unique words: 111.0 106.607317073 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.575129533679 0.547539520022 105% => OK
syllable_count: 297.0 283.868780488 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 10.0 4.33902439024 230% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 3.36585365854 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 8.94146341463 145% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 22.4926829268 62% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 32.3810522432 43.030603864 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 76.5384615385 112.824112599 68% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.8461538462 22.9334400587 65% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.53846153846 5.23603664747 29% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 2.0 3.83414634146 52% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 10.0 4.09268292683 244% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.045893121995 0.215688989381 21% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0289054780334 0.103423049105 28% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0735380762552 0.0843802449381 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0914171049147 0.15604864568 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0768932044144 0.0819641961636 94% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.3 13.2329268293 78% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 65.73 61.2550243902 107% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 10.3012195122 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.06 11.4140731707 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.75 8.06136585366 109% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 40.7170731707 133% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 11.4329268293 52% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.9970731707 69% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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