Dear sir,
I am writing this letter to draw your immediate attention.i had stayed in your hotel for two days in Room no 104 for my business meeting, held in conference Hall on second floor of your hotel. I returned my home in Delhi, and found that I had left my very important file in your hotel.
Let me explain this in details. my meeting was scheduled at 2pm yesterday and while giving presentation I kept that file in the drawer of the pordium.at the end of meeting, I had to submit minutes of meeting online and then rush to airport for my flight. I was so occupied with the work that I forgot to take the file. That file contains blueprint of my next project, and it is therefore vital to me.
Therefore, I need your favour in recovering the file and sending it to my address. my address and contact details had been entered in your visiting register. I would be highly obliged to you if you please send it at my address by mail.
Your assistance in this matter would be greatly appreciated.
Yours sincerely
CHHAVI ARORA
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear sir, I am writing this letter to draw your im...
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Line 2, column 67, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...letter to draw your immediate attention.i had stayed in your hotel for two days i...
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Line 4, column 33, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: My
...tel. Let me explain this in details. my meeting was scheduled at 2pm yesterday ...
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Line 6, column 84, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: My
... the file and sending it to my address. my address and contact details had been en...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, second, so, then, therefore, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 41.0 32.9175257732 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 28.0 26.3917525773 106% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 853.0 937.175257732 91% => OK
No of words: 190.0 206.0 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.48947368421 4.54256449028 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.71268753763 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.50573303864 2.54303337028 99% => OK
Unique words: 115.0 127.690721649 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.605263157895 0.622605031667 97% => OK
syllable_count: 260.1 290.88556701 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.13402061856 131% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.463917525773 431% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 61.3313719892 44.8134815571 137% => OK
Chars per sentence: 77.5454545455 76.5299724578 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.2727272727 16.8248392259 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.45454545455 4.34317383033 80% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 2.54639175258 157% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.173451388471 0.216113520407 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0612099556265 0.0766984524023 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0804168616808 0.0603063233224 133% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0891781014395 0.12726935374 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0597181128529 0.0580467560999 103% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.4 8.37731958763 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 70.7449484536 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 7.45979381443 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.47 8.71597938144 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.72 7.59969072165 102% => OK
difficult_words: 39.0 41.2886597938 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 8.62886597938 151% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.2247191011 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.25 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.