The charts below give information on the ages of the populations of Yemen and Italy in 2000 and projections for 2050.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The charts below illustrates the ages of the Yemen, Italy populations during the year of 2000 and projections for the year of 2050.
It is clear from the chart that the group of 0-14 years old reached a half of the chart while in projections for 2050, the group of Yemen people 15-59 years old will account for over a half of the chart. In addition, the group of Italy people from 15 to 59 years old accounted for half and a quatre of the chart.
On the one hand, in the year of 2000, the Yemen citizens from 0-14 years old accounted for 46.3% while the group of 15-59 years accounted for 50.1%. Moreover, the 60+ years old will be predicted to account for 57.3% and more than that in a group of 0-14 years about 23%. The group of 60+ years seem to be remain at the figure of 57% in 2050.
On the other hand, the Italy citizen in group of 15-59 years old accounted for 61,6% and this figure was higher than that in group of 60+ years about 25%. In addition, the Italy group from 0-14 years accounted for 14.3%. Moreover, the Italy group of 15-59 years will be predicted to account for 46.2%. This figure will higher than that in 60+ years' group and group of 0-14 years about 15,5% and 27,5% respectively.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
moreover, while, in addition, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.0 71% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 1.00243902439 399% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 7.0 5.60731707317 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 44.0 33.7804878049 130% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 982.0 965.302439024 102% => OK
No of words: 229.0 196.424390244 117% => OK
Chars per words: 4.28820960699 4.92477711251 87% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.89008302616 3.73543355544 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.06532214842 2.65546596893 78% => OK
Unique words: 78.0 106.607317073 73% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.340611353712 0.547539520022 62% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 251.1 283.868780488 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.1 1.45097560976 76% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 9.0 4.33902439024 207% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 22.4926829268 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.3455078045 43.030603864 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.2 112.824112599 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.9 22.9334400587 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.7 5.23603664747 90% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.09268292683 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.129234792942 0.215688989381 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0897621115258 0.103423049105 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0945255061685 0.0843802449381 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.150256560723 0.15604864568 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.119089028558 0.0819641961636 145% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.2 13.2329268293 77% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 91.44 61.2550243902 149% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.0 10.3012195122 58% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 7.9 11.4140731707 69% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 5.76 8.06136585366 71% => OK
difficult_words: 15.0 40.7170731707 37% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 11.4329268293 114% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.9970731707 98% => OK
text_standard: 6.0 11.0658536585 54% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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