Today more and more tourists are visiting places where conditions are difficult, such as the Sahara desert or the Antarctic.
What are the benefits and disadvantages for tourists who visit such places?
Nowadays, travelling to challenging places are getting overwhelming popularity. People are visiting places where access is not convenient. These expeditions provide them with an opportunity to unleash the strengths to survive in stark conditions. However, injuries and deaths are significant downsides.
The benefits of travelling to these sites are to discover the inner-strengths to survive in harsh conditions. To clarify, visiting and staying at these places require a lot of courage, fitness, mental and physical strengths. Hence, this all provides a person with an opportunity to prepare himself before leaving for such kind of expeditions. This, in turn, helps a person to instil and adopt these qualities for a lifetime. Moreover, people come across many difficult circumstances during their visit, where they have to take decisions in the spur of the moment when the situation goes against the plans. Therefore, improvement in decision-making skills can also be associated as a significant benefit.
However, there are downsides for these kinds of expeditions as well. To being with, in these locations, often, people come across with extreme conditions, from blood-freezing cold weather to scorching heat. Hence, most of the people cannot adopt these conditions and get themselves ill. Furthermore, many people get injured while visiting these places, and many lose a major body part due to non-availability of first-aid. For instance, according to the statistics published by PALTA, on average, 25 people lost their lives while travelling to the base camp of K2 last year.
To conclude, the evidence cited above provide enough support that visiting these places promotes fitness and a healthy lifestyle along with the development of courage. However, these all traits come with a cost of losing lives and major body parts.
| Post date | Users | Rates | Link to Content |
|---|---|---|---|
| 2020-01-14 | Saeed Najd Ataei | 89 | view |
| 2019-12-12 | vivekrana | 11 | view |
| 2019-12-05 | wildhog.tejwani@gmail.com | 73 | view |
| 2019-12-05 | wildhog.tejwani@gmail.com | 84 | view |
| 2019-12-05 | ChitraSenthil | 89 | view |
- You would like to attend a training course. Write a letter to your company manager. In your letter, you should say:why you would like to attend this course?why it would be beneficial for you and the company?suggest how to arrange time for it. 78
- Some peple think it is better for children to grown up in the city, while others think that life in the coutryside is more suitable for them. What are the advantages and disadvantages of both places? 73
- In many places, new homes are needed, but the only space available for building them is in the countryside. Some people believe it is more important to protect the countryside and not build new homes there. What is your opinion about this? 84
- Some people believe that there should be fixed punishments for each type of crime Others however argue that the circumstances of an individual crime and the motivation for committing it should always be taken into account when deciding on the punishment 78
- Some people believe that capital punishment should never be used Others however argue that it should be allowed for the most serious crimes Discuss both views and give your own opinion 61
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 73, Rule ID: BEING_BEGIN[1]
Message: Did you mean 'begin'?
Suggestion: begin
... these kinds of expeditions as well. To being with, in these locations, often, people...
^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, furthermore, hence, however, if, moreover, so, therefore, well, while, for instance, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1566.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 283.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.53356890459 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10153676581 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.02083150257 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 170.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.600706713781 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 485.1 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 36.2990272206 49.4020404114 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.1176470588 106.682146367 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.6470588235 20.7667163134 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.17647058824 7.06120827912 87% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.144891829952 0.244688304435 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0511817190599 0.084324248473 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0551538162942 0.0667982634062 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0970773896234 0.151304729494 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0423616149406 0.056905535591 74% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.78 50.2224549098 93% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.5 12.4159519038 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.67 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 78.4519038076 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.78957915832 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
---------------------
Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
---------------------
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.