people should be responsible for pollution problems caused by transportation, while others think the government should be held acccountable .Discuss both views and give your opinion
Transportation is one of the crucial factors in polluting the environment. Although whereas some people believe that the public should be responsible, I agree with those who argue that the government has a significant role in protecting the habitat.
One of the pressing problems is that people are not encouraged to use the mode of transportation provided by the government. This is because of the convenience that makes people more inclined towards their own choice of transport. For instance, Evidence suggests that there has been a 60% rise in lone drivers. As a result, every member of the family now has their car to travel for work, which essentially increases the impact of the carbon footprint through gas emissions per car.
However, I believe that the government has a larger role to play in implementing strict rules and regulations that can save the environment. The reason for this is non-adherence to policies, which will impose hefty fines to the general public, and this, in turn, would bring discipline to follow it. For example, the compulsory practice of car-pooling on busy hours or bike commute to workplace can reduce the number of vehicles on the road in the country. Conversely, if policy-makers take no action, then there will be a surge in the proportion of cars that are polluting nature and its habitats. Consequently, the people of that country will suffer health issues attributed to bad air quality.
In conclusion, the use of public transportation by people and the government policy of limiting access to cars at certain times can aid in reducing the effect of pollution gradually.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, conversely, however, if, so, then, whereas, for example, for instance, in conclusion, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.3376753507 180% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1364.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 267.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.10861423221 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04229324003 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.99721894596 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.602996254682 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 423.9 506.74238477 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.764177453 49.4020404114 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.666666667 106.682146367 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.25 20.7667163134 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.66666666667 7.06120827912 137% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.151407491999 0.244688304435 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0502251993515 0.084324248473 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0376151080583 0.0667982634062 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0942112871729 0.151304729494 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0386571639485 0.056905535591 68% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.65 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.04 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.