Some people think that it would be better for large companies and industry to move to regional areas outside large urban centers. Do the advantages outweighs the disadvantages?
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It is some people's view that large companies relocate to the suburb away from the city. The benefits of this overwhelm its drawbacks.
Clearly, there are some benefits to relocation of large industries to rural areas. Firstly, it creates job opportunity for the dwellers which appears to eradicate poverty. Residents of the community attend to menial jobs in the factory, they get paid and their immediate needs are met. In addition, the raw materials needed for production are readily available in the rural area, so the poor transportation factor to the city is solved. Another benefits is the large land space for construction available in the regional areas. They are given a large portion of land to install their heavy equipments and building offices.
Despite these advantages, there are some drawbacks to it. Relocating to the regional areas makes the organization looses valuable customers, as their new site will be too far away from them. Also, there will be lack of well skilled workers. Some of their employees appear to be used to city life, moving to the rural area might not go down well with them, so they forfeit the job. Getting to the community, the company will need to employ more workers, doing so, people with little or no experience will be employed which might have a negative effect on the company's production. Although, these can be solved by introducing an attractive pay to the highly skilled staffs from the city
In conclusion, some people think large companies should move to the rural areas. Despite its advantages such as poverty eradication and large land space, there are also some drawbacks that can be properly managed.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, if, so, well, in addition, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1406.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 279.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.0394265233 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08696624509 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61810231504 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.584229390681 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 441.9 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.746396503 49.4020404114 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.7333333333 106.682146367 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.6 20.7667163134 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.73333333333 7.06120827912 67% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.298195139219 0.244688304435 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0945750193949 0.084324248473 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0661889042214 0.0667982634062 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.193737748901 0.151304729494 128% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0624583907501 0.056905535591 110% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.95 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.94 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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