The two pie charts compare and contrast statistic figures on the results of a survey about what makes people from two distinct age groups experiencing the biggest happiness in their lives, measured by percentage.
Generally speaking, people surveyed most enjoyed their greatest happiness once they gain many successes pf their jobs.
A closer look at the diagrams emphasize, for the correspondents from the under-30-age group and over-30-age group announced that the happiest thing they gain was being succeeded at work, which shares the same amount of figures with 31% and 32% respectively. The former group, however, 15% of the interviewees believed that traveling was the most enjoyable thing they have ever done before. Likewise, the same amount of figures in the other group felt that they were able to gain happiness once they were with their family. Moreover, approximately a quarter of people interviewed from both categories conveyed that they experienced the most happiness while doing their hobbies. The younger age group found themselves deep in happiness as having an appealed outlook accounted for 18% which was roughly less than 2% of people over 30 with the thought of financial security would bring them the most happiness in life.
- The chart below shows male and female fitness membership between 1970 and 2000.Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.(Study Sample) 73
- It is suggested that everyone wants to have a car, a television and a fridge. Do disadvantages of this development for society outweigh advantages? 84
- The only way to improve road safety is to give much stricter punishments on driving offenses To what extent do you agree or disagree 84
- The diagram below shows information about the amount of money spent on alcohol and drugs Summarize the info by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant 26
- The graph below shows the amount of electricity produced from different energy sources to supply the city of New York between 1980 and 2000 78
Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, likewise, look, moreover, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.0 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 6.8 44% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.15609756098 190% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 5.60731707317 303% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 27.0 33.7804878049 80% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1060.0 965.302439024 110% => OK
No of words: 199.0 196.424390244 101% => OK
Chars per words: 5.32663316583 4.92477711251 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.75589349951 3.73543355544 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7020227135 2.65546596893 102% => OK
Unique words: 124.0 106.607317073 116% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.623115577889 0.547539520022 114% => OK
syllable_count: 305.1 283.868780488 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 3.36585365854 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 22.4926829268 124% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 52.6753630984 43.030603864 122% => OK
Chars per sentence: 151.428571429 112.824112599 134% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.4285714286 22.9334400587 124% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.28571428571 5.23603664747 120% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 3.70975609756 189% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.09268292683 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.225075007685 0.215688989381 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.106296767584 0.103423049105 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.076725157 0.0843802449381 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.170743355282 0.15604864568 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0804526185698 0.0819641961636 98% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.9 13.2329268293 135% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.52 61.2550243902 84% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 10.3012195122 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.93 11.4140731707 122% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.23 8.06136585366 114% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 40.7170731707 130% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 11.4329268293 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.9970731707 120% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.0658536585 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.