During a recent plane journey, you sat next to a businessman who owns a chain of restaurants. You talked to him and he suggested that you should contact him about
A possible job in one of his restaurants.
Write a letter to this businessman. In your letter
* remind him when and where you met
* Tell him what kind of job you are interested in
* Say why you think you would be suitable for a job
Write at least 150 words. Begin your letter as dear...
Dear Mr. Alihan
I hope you are well. I am writing to remember you concerning your suggestion that you provided to me in related your restaurant. In fact, in last month I had a journey to Milan and fortunately, in the plane I saw you and communicated with each other about your chain restaurants. You offer me a big job opportunity in one of your restaurants.
I am to explain you about my restaurant’s job experiences. Prior to my present job placement, I worked for Milk restaurant for five years as a chef assistant and I really learned more about a professional chef features. I also acquired much know ledge of managing of international restaurants in summer internships when I was a college student. I have also been working in Nancy restaurant as a chef for two years. I want you know about my significant interest in chef’s job from when I was a teenager and I have always tried to cook a various types of food.
By considering the mentioned information in above, I ensure you I quite suitable for chef job opportunity. I am a responsible person, hard-working and a good team player. Enclosed is a copy of my information
I am looking forward to your favorable reply at an early date.
Yours Faithfully
Mans
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 421, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...ncy restaurant as a chef for two years. I want you know about my significant inte...
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Line 5, column 555, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'type'?
Suggestion: type
...d I have always tried to cook a various types of food. By considering the mentioned...
^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, look, really, so, well, in fact, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 4.92783505155 0% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 38.0 32.9175257732 115% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 26.3917525773 121% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1025.0 937.175257732 109% => OK
No of words: 217.0 206.0 105% => OK
Chars per words: 4.72350230415 4.54256449028 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.8380880478 3.78020617076 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.20768444912 2.54303337028 126% => OK
Unique words: 128.0 127.690721649 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.589861751152 0.622605031667 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 325.8 290.88556701 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.13402061856 131% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 1.44329896907 346% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.4382600628 44.8134815571 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 78.8461538462 76.5299724578 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.6923076923 16.8248392259 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.92307692308 4.34317383033 90% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.94845360825 152% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.240888423802 0.216113520407 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0937526492603 0.0766984524023 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0870689217819 0.0603063233224 144% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.132228486762 0.12726935374 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.132731687708 0.0580467560999 229% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.1 8.37731958763 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 70.7449484536 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 7.45979381443 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.8 8.71597938144 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.92 7.59969072165 104% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 41.2886597938 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 8.62886597938 99% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.