In these days,Mostly new society’s made a park some markets and playgrounds in the avenue.This idea is good for city or country.
Firstly,People in present do not do physical movements because the main reason is everyone busy with their life.mostly people busy with their works.House wives busy with tv serials and children also busy with play games or watching movies.so nobody has a time for walking or doing some practical exercises.Some of society do not have any play ground or own park that is why people do not want to go far away from their homes.
Now landlord who makes a new colony they think about make a new shopping mall,parks,playgrounds in the new society.It is very helpful to individual who will live there.Old people can stay in the park.children can play with their friends and family members can do shopping all together.i am totally agree with this statement.
To conclusion landlord should be think about this topic.it is very important to us.Must we need some facilities in our society
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: , Mostly
In these days,Mostly new society's made a park some mar...
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Suggestion: This
...e markets and playgrounds in the avenue.This idea is good for city or country. Firs...
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Suggestion: , People
...ea is good for city or country. Firstly,People in present do not do physical movements...
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Suggestion: House
...ife.mostly people busy with their works.House wives busy with tv serials and children...
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Suggestion: Some
...lking or doing some practical exercises.Some of society do not have any play ground ...
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Suggestion: , parks
...hey think about make a new shopping mall,parks,playgrounds in the new society.It is ve...
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...ll,parks,playgrounds in the new society.It is very helpful to individual who will ...
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Suggestion: Old
...lpful to individual who will live there.Old people can stay in the park.children ca...
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...ly members can do shopping all together.i am totally agree with this statement. ...
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Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'agreed'.
Suggestion: agreed
...n do shopping all together.i am totally agree with this statement. To conclusion lan...
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Suggestion: thought
...ment. To conclusion landlord should be think about this topic.it is very important t...
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Suggestion: Must
...t this topic.it is very important to us.Must we need some facilities in our society
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, if, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 41.998997996 50% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 848.0 1615.20841683 53% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 170.0 315.596192385 54% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.98823529412 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.61087313685 4.20363070211 86% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.10940085908 2.80592935109 111% => OK
Unique words: 109.0 176.041082164 62% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.641176470588 0.561755894193 114% => OK
syllable_count: 257.4 506.74238477 51% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 4.0 16.0721442886 25% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 42.0 20.2975951904 207% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 127.622490181 49.4020404114 258% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 212.0 106.682146367 199% => OK
Words per sentence: 42.5 20.7667163134 205% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 7.0 7.06120827912 99% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 12.0 5.01903807615 239% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.126171651162 0.244688304435 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0665010759627 0.084324248473 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0502093987178 0.0667982634062 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0665010759627 0.151304729494 44% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0502093987178 0.056905535591 88% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 23.3 13.0946893788 178% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.31 50.2224549098 74% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 18.5 11.3001002004 164% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.55 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.16 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 37.0 78.4519038076 47% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 18.5 9.78957915832 189% => OK
gunning_fog: 18.8 10.1190380762 186% => OK
text_standard: 19.0 10.7795591182 176% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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