You cannot go to a company where you got an offer. Write a letter to the HR supervisor to
1- Explain the reason why you decline the offer
2- Express you gratitude
3- Explain you like your current job very much
Dear Sir,
I am writing in reference to inform you that I won’t be able to join your esteemed organization. Allow me to explain the reason in detail.
To elucidate, although the role offered to me was much senior however the job scope covered only domestic market which I believe would give me limited exposure. Additionally the role provides limited customer interactions which will further reduce the customer facing experience.
Having said this, I would like to personally thank your recruitment staff since they were very helpful and patient during this entire recruiting process.
Lastly, my current job offers me international exposure and plethora of travelling opportunities which help me in acquiring more knowledge and a deep understanding about handling customers in international environment. Above all in my current organization there are many cross-vertical opportunities in emerging technologies like cyber security for which I may be considered in the near future so I would like to have to decline your offer at this stage.
Yours sincerely
Kevin Saud
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 10, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Sir, I am writing in reference to inform you ...
^^^^
Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...w me to explain the reason in detail. To elucidate, although the role offered ...
^^^^
Line 7, column 162, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Additionally,
...believe would give me limited exposure. Additionally the role provides limited customer inte...
^^^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, lastly, may, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 32.9175257732 70% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 26.3917525773 95% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.85567010309 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 935.0 937.175257732 100% => OK
No of words: 168.0 206.0 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.56547619048 4.54256449028 123% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.60020574368 3.78020617076 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.13497840011 2.54303337028 123% => OK
Unique words: 120.0 127.690721649 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.714285714286 0.622605031667 115% => OK
syllable_count: 298.8 290.88556701 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.41237113402 127% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.13402061856 44% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 12.6804123711 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 16.3608247423 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 69.6705416586 44.8134815571 155% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.875 76.5299724578 153% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0 16.8248392259 125% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.0 4.34317383033 69% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.94845360825 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.157563831349 0.216113520407 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.063197831418 0.0766984524023 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0448590692099 0.0603063233224 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0917721288264 0.12726935374 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.070932703972 0.0580467560999 122% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.3 8.37731958763 183% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 33.24 70.7449484536 47% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 3.82989690722 292% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 7.45979381443 185% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.03 8.71597938144 172% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.75 7.59969072165 128% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 41.2886597938 131% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 8.62886597938 99% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 8.54432989691 122% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.