Air transport is increasingly used to export fruit and vegetables to countries where they cannot be grown or are out of season.
What are the advantages and disadvantages of this?
<p class="MsoNormal" style="margin-bottom:12.0pt;mso-pagination:none"><span style="font-size:16.0pt;font-family:"Times",serif;mso-fareast-font-family:Times;
color:black;mso-bidi-font-weight:bold;mso-bidi-font-style:italic">Nowadays,
fruits and vegetables used to be transferred by planes to nations, which they
cannot be implanted or are out of season. It is often argued that export fruit
and vegetables between countries have both advantages and disadvantages. This
essay shows the positives and negatives sides of food crops which has been
exported by air.<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal" style="margin-bottom:12.0pt;mso-pagination:none"><span style="font-size:16.0pt;font-family:"Times",serif;mso-fareast-font-family:Times;
color:black;mso-bidi-font-weight:bold;mso-bidi-font-style:italic">On the
positive side, transporting goods such as fruit and vegetables by aeroplanes
between countries, not only does give us the choice to eat a variety of fruits
and vegetables from a different culture but also we can eat all types of crops
any time of the year. For instance, about 10 years ago, in Egypt we could eat
Watermelon at a few months only from June to July, whilst now we can find it in
markets at any time of the year. Moreover, we can eat Indian fruits which are
not available before in Egypt.<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal" style="margin-bottom:12.0pt;mso-pagination:none"><span style="font-size:16.0pt;font-family:"Times",serif;mso-fareast-font-family:Times;
color:black;mso-bidi-font-weight:bold;mso-bidi-font-style:italic">On the
negative side, importing fruits and vegetables over a long distance by air from
far countries lead to put some chemical material by exporting company to keep
it fresh for a long time. In addition to that, it increases the taxes on goods.
Consequently, the prices of these items become high. In 2017, research from the
World Health Organization showed that the chemical material was been put on
crops during transporting it causes dangerous diseases such as cancer.<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal" style="margin-bottom:12.0pt;mso-pagination:none"><span style="font-size:16.0pt;font-family:"Times",serif;mso-fareast-font-family:Times;
color:black;mso-bidi-font-weight:bold;mso-bidi-font-style:italic">In
conclusion, in this day and age, transporting fruits and vegetables by air has
increased and it has a positive side which gives us the ability to eat many
types of them which comes from different countries and during any season. However,
it has drawbacks which can harm our health.<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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color:black;mso-bidi-font-weight:bold;mso-bidi-font-style:italic"> <o:p></o:p></span></p>
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| 2019-10-26 | Ahmed karem Mahmoud Ahmed | 73 | view |
| 2019-10-26 | Ahmed karem Mahmoud Ahmed | 56 | view |
| 2019-10-26 | Ahmed karem Mahmoud Ahmed | 67 | view |
| 2019-10-26 | Ahmed karem Mahmoud Ahmed | 73 | view |
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, however, if, moreover, so, for instance, in addition, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2854.0 1615.20841683 177% => OK
No of words: 301.0 315.596192385 95% => OK
Chars per words: 9.48172757475 5.12529762239 185% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16525528304 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 17.0748716293 2.80592935109 609% => Word_Length_SD is high.
Unique words: 162.0 176.041082164 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.538205980066 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 731.7 506.74238477 144% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 2.4 1.60771543086 149% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0721442886 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 33.0 20.2975951904 163% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 245.209107035 49.4020404114 496% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 317.111111111 106.682146367 297% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 33.4444444444 20.7667163134 161% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.55555555556 7.06120827912 135% => OK
Paragraphs: 32.0 4.38176352705 730% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 12.0 5.01903807615 239% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0954188665551 0.244688304435 39% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0662002878596 0.084324248473 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0639609535189 0.0667982634062 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0573940539123 0.151304729494 38% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0873316536889 0.056905535591 153% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 39.9 13.0946893788 305% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -29.7 50.2224549098 -59% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 14.6 7.44779559118 196% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 25.6 11.3001002004 227% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 38.3 12.4159519038 308% => Coleman_liau_index is high.
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.74 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 78.4519038076 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 23.0 9.78957915832 235% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 15.2 10.1190380762 150% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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