Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? It is more important for governments to spend money to improve Internet access than to improve public transportation. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Thanks to technological advances many areas of our daily lives have become more easier and comfortable. one of these achievements is transportation system, which has made the greatest contributions to our every day life that we can go much faster to our expected destinations with ease and less expanse. personally, i believe that governments should fund public transportation more to improve it than any other areas, such as internet. I feel this way for two reasons, which i will explore in the following essay.
First of all, public transportation has greater impact on environment. The climate change and global warming have been affecting the world dramatically that almost most of the ecosystems have lost their qualities. one of the leading factors for this disaster is the carbon dioxide released from cars, which use gasoline or diesels. If every person acquire a car, then the mass of the damage is much higher. The solution is frequent use of public transportation, which can carry many people at once. As a result, the pollution decreases readily. my country's policy is a compelling example of this. About two years ago, the city i live in is considered one of the most polluted capitals in the world. people's health had worsen that hospitals' rooms couldn't contain that many people. In winter times, the case became even worse that almost everyone in the city had one form of breathing problems. then the government decided that it increased taxes on personal cars. not allowing old cars to be driven, and in turn encouraging people to take public transportation. As a result, pollutant rate of my city has greatly decreased.
Secondly, not everyone is capable of driving their own cars. Some people have greater disadvantages of possessing their own transportations such as children, middle and high school students or college students, people with disabilities, old people, and so on. In each of the case, good public transportation that can get them to wherever they want is utmost necessity. For instance, cousin is a college student, and he has lots of classes and school works that he spent most of his time on his college. Unlike other countries, on campus housing has not developed in my country. As a result, students need to hire off apartments that are usually found far away from their colleges. For my cousin's case his family spent all of their money to his college tuition that they don't have extra money to buy him his own car. And because of those reasons, he need to go his school at 6 a.m and return from the school at 11 p.m. In his case, his only friend is public transportation.
In conclusion, i strongly believe that government should support public transportation more and pay attention on it to its improvements. this is because public transportation helps environment and carry people who don't have their personal cars.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, second, secondly, so, then, for instance, i feel, in conclusion, such as, as a result, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 15.1003584229 93% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 13.8261648746 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 17.0 11.0286738351 154% => OK
Pronoun: 56.0 43.0788530466 130% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 56.0 52.1666666667 107% => OK
Nominalization: 18.0 8.0752688172 223% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2384.0 1977.66487455 121% => OK
No of words: 480.0 407.700716846 118% => OK
Chars per words: 4.96666666667 4.8611393121 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.68069463864 4.48103885553 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88880667284 2.67179642975 108% => OK
Unique words: 261.0 212.727598566 123% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.54375 0.524837075471 104% => OK
syllable_count: 733.5 618.680645161 119% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Article: 5.0 3.08781362007 162% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.86738351254 214% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 27.0 20.6003584229 131% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 39.2235686825 48.9658058833 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.2962962963 100.406767564 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.7777777778 20.6045352989 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.25925925926 5.45110844103 78% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 17.0 5.5376344086 307% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.85842293907 207% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.88709677419 143% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.134795423567 0.236089414692 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0342836535856 0.076458572812 45% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0447776995757 0.0737576698707 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0885012933595 0.150856017488 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0327240065191 0.0645574589148 51% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.9 11.7677419355 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 58.1214874552 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.1575268817 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.25 10.9000537634 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.07 8.01818996416 101% => OK
difficult_words: 109.0 86.8835125448 125% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 10.002688172 90% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 78.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.5 Out of 30
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