Some say that people living in high-rise apartments are lonely and unhappy, while others say that it’s advantageous to stay in high-rise apartments.
Discuss both views and give your opinion.
there is an increasing trend observed in infrastructure sector and more number of high rise buildings are being constructed in cities. While many people opine that living in high rise apartments make them feel lonely and dejected, others believe that it is more beneficial to reside in high rise buildings as it provides ample of modern facilities in a lavish way. this essay will discuss both the viewpoints and give my opinion.
The primary reason that people feel unhappy in staying high rise apartments is the lack of interaction with the neighbors due to their hectic work schedule which keep engross themselves in their routine. this instils a feeling of loneliness and isolation among the retired parents who do not have any activity to perform regardless of relaxing.
Another reason that people feel disheartened is due to alarming rate of flat rates as a result of which very few people afford to owe an apartment resulting in most of the spaces to be vacant. owing to this, most of the people residing in high rise township suffer from desolation and feeling of emptiness.
On the other hand, some people have a viewpoint that staying in high rise apartment has more merits.
The potential advantage is that high rise buildings are equipped with gym, Joggers Park, swimming pool and amphitheater. this enables the people to grab all these benefits and live their life in a more luxurious manner.
Moreover, high rise apartments allows people to view scenic beauty of the city which makes them refreshed and motivated. In other words, it is really a pleasant moment to feel the fresh air by standing out in the gallery with awesome glance of the downtown.
In conclusion, although there are some downsides of staying in high rise buildings, in my opinion, i feel that living in high rise towers is a positive trend on the grounds of state-of-art amenities and the location.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, moreover, really, so, while, i feel, in conclusion, as a result, in my opinion, in other words, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 41.998997996 121% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1592.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 319.0 315.596192385 101% => OK
Chars per words: 4.99059561129 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22617688928 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63205302902 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 174.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.545454545455 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 489.6 506.74238477 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.7814835372 49.4020404114 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 122.461538462 106.682146367 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.5384615385 20.7667163134 118% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.0 7.06120827912 127% => OK
Paragraphs: 7.0 4.38176352705 160% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.397539829157 0.244688304435 162% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.14838606326 0.084324248473 176% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0995665891149 0.0667982634062 149% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.209694758265 0.151304729494 139% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0904983734271 0.056905535591 159% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 13.0946893788 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 50.2224549098 111% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.96 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.03 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 78.4519038076 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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