The chart illustrates the information about the charity work done by British people percentage-wise by various age groups in the years 1990 and 2010.
Overall at the beginning of the period, most of the charity work was done by middle-aged people and at the end of the period, the majority of the charity was from old people and a young-adult group of people was involved least in charity in both years.
The middle-aged people of ages from 36 to 50, almost 40% did the majority of the charity work in 1990 while this number fell by about 6% in the year 2010. And almost 30% of the people of ages from 26 to 35 did charity work in 1990 as compared to 2010 only 24% of people did charitable work. In the year 1990, people aged between 51 to 65 took their greater share in charity estimated at about 35% while this number rose after 20 years by about 4.5%. The number of people ages greater than 65 took part in charity work was 32% in 1990, this figures increase slightly by 3% in the year 2010.
In contrast, the age group did less charity work of all groups include people ages 18 to 25, which was approximately 15% in 1990 which decreased significantly by about 9% in 2010.
- The chart below gives information on the percentages of British people giving money to charity by age range for the years 1990 and 2010. 67
- The chart below gives information on the percentages of British people giving money to charity by age range for the years 1990 and 2010. 67
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Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, while, in contrast
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.0 71% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 33.7804878049 151% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 966.0 965.302439024 100% => OK
No of words: 219.0 196.424390244 111% => OK
Chars per words: 4.41095890411 4.92477711251 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.84690116678 3.73543355544 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.40644034854 2.65546596893 91% => OK
Unique words: 96.0 106.607317073 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.438356164384 0.547539520022 80% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 273.6 283.868780488 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.2 1.45097560976 83% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 31.0 22.4926829268 138% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 37.3204545327 43.030603864 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 138.0 112.824112599 122% => OK
Words per sentence: 31.2857142857 22.9334400587 136% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.14285714286 5.23603664747 60% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 3.70975609756 189% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.09268292683 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.321551047684 0.215688989381 149% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.202745516854 0.103423049105 196% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0856295202782 0.0843802449381 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.235654632496 0.15604864568 151% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.107745802146 0.0819641961636 131% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.0 13.2329268293 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 73.85 61.2550243902 121% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.3012195122 104% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.89 11.4140731707 78% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.98 8.06136585366 87% => OK
difficult_words: 25.0 40.7170731707 61% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 18.5 11.4329268293 162% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.4 10.9970731707 131% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.