The graph below shows population figures for India and China since the year 2000 and predicted population growth up until 2050.Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The graph below shows population figures for India and China since the year 2000 and predicted population growth up until 2050.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph below compares the population figures for China and India since the year 2000 and predicted increasing until 2050.

Overall, It is clear that population figure of China rises moderately, the number of netizens in India grows sharply.

In India, population substantially augment from the year 2000 to 2050. It was started with 1,000 billion in 2000. But, until 2050, population will reach 1,600 billion.

It could sê seen that the number people in China was 1,250 billion in the year 2000. It is gone up significantly from year 2000 to 2030, 1,250 billion to 1,450 billion, it increase 0,2 billion. On the other hand, population will decline slightly between year 2030 and 2050. The figure will fall down by 0,05 billion, from 1,450 to 1,400.

In 2030, both India and China will have as many as population. Until 2050, population in India will be more than China 0,2 billion. It will be the most populous country in the world.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 173, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'increases'?
Suggestion: increases
...030, 1,250 billion to 1,450 billion, it increase 0,2 billion. On the other hand, populat...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.0 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 1.00243902439 698% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 8.0 5.60731707317 143% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 28.0 33.7804878049 83% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 3.97073170732 201% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 787.0 965.302439024 82% => OK
No of words: 161.0 196.424390244 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.88819875776 4.92477711251 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.56210296601 3.73543355544 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.38295711803 2.65546596893 90% => OK
Unique words: 85.0 106.607317073 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.527950310559 0.547539520022 96% => OK
syllable_count: 206.1 283.868780488 73% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 1.53170731707 392% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 3.36585365854 178% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 8.94146341463 134% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 22.4926829268 58% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 25.6876267231 43.030603864 60% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 65.5833333333 112.824112599 58% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 13.4166666667 22.9334400587 59% => More words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 2.16666666667 5.23603664747 41% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 3.83414634146 130% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.09268292683 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.339153220146 0.215688989381 157% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.154333345324 0.103423049105 149% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.130441948536 0.0843802449381 155% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.247467964545 0.15604864568 159% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.143646059035 0.0819641961636 175% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.3 13.2329268293 63% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 83.66 61.2550243902 137% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 4.8 10.3012195122 47% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 10.49 11.4140731707 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.83 8.06136585366 85% => OK
difficult_words: 26.0 40.7170731707 64% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 11.4329268293 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.9970731707 65% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 11.0658536585 63% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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