the Little Ice Age
The materials discusses several possible causes of the Little Ice Age. while the reading looks at the topic from one perspective, the listening challenges certain points outlined in the reading passage.
First, the author contends that the cooling climate happened because of ocean currents disruption. One the other hand, the professor refutes this and states that gulf steam fluctuation happened only in Europe and North America, but it did not happen in southren hemisphere, such as New Zeland and South Africa. The lecturer mentions that this theory could not explain the cooling climate at the southren areas, so it was not a possible cause of the Little Ice Age.
Second, the reading posits that the volcanic eruptions could cause the Little Ice Age. On the contrary, the listening contradicts this and assumes that, in order to a volcanic eruption causes a cooling climate, it should be very strong and has enough dust to cause a striking visual difficulty, a colorful sunset and a gray or brown snow. However, the professor adds that there is no report that these conditions happened during the Little Ice Age. The lecturer points out that the volcanic eruption was not strong enough to cause the cooling climate.
Third, the writer states that a decline in human populations could contribute to the cooling climate. Conversely, the lecturer challenges this and posits that human populations did not decline for a long time, the populations grew back quickly. The professor states that people cut down forests again to cultivate crops that needed to feed growing populations. As a result, decreasing the human populations did not cause the long term global cooling of the global climate.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 15, Rule ID: AGREEMENT_SENT_START[1]
Message: You should probably use 'discuss'.
Suggestion: discuss
The materials discusses several possible causes of the Little I...
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Line 1, column 72, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: While
... possible causes of the Little Ice Age. while the reading looks at the topic from one...
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Line 7, column 474, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...m global cooling of the global climate.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, conversely, first, however, if, look, second, so, third, while, such as, as a result, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 10.4613686534 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 5.04856512141 79% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 7.30242825607 123% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 12.0772626932 99% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 22.412803532 89% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 30.3222958057 73% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 5.01324503311 80% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1428.0 1373.03311258 104% => OK
No of words: 277.0 270.72406181 102% => OK
Chars per words: 5.15523465704 5.08290768461 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07962216107 4.04702891845 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55589548969 2.5805825403 99% => OK
Unique words: 141.0 145.348785872 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.509025270758 0.540411800872 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 436.5 419.366225166 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.55342163355 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 3.25607064018 31% => OK
Article: 14.0 8.23620309051 170% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.25165562914 160% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.51434878587 66% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 2.5761589404 78% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 13.0662251656 99% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 21.2450331126 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.8957349818 49.2860985944 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.846153846 110.228320801 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.3076923077 21.698381199 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.15384615385 7.06452816374 115% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 4.19205298013 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 4.33554083885 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 4.45695364238 112% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.27373068433 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.245768200883 0.272083759551 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.122162151691 0.0996497079465 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.18679028939 0.0662205650399 282% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.166101117829 0.162205337803 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.104564063737 0.0443174109184 236% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 13.3589403974 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 53.8541721854 93% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.0289183223 104% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.65 12.2367328918 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.16 8.42419426049 97% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 63.6247240618 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 10.7273730684 84% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.498013245 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.2008830022 80% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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