Many university students live with their families while others need to live to live away from home because their universities are in different places.
What are the advantages and disadvantages both situations?
The trend of migrating to other places for education, business and emloyment is on the rise since transportation modes have turned this world into a global villege. Presently, some proportion of people tend to stay with family while persuing university education to be blessed with affectionate comforts of family. By contrast, other students study at far away places in universities for social, personal or advancement reasons. This essay will examine pros and cons of both sides with my own perception.
There are manifold advantages of former view. First and foremost, living with family during ...
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Sentence: The trend of migrating to other places for education, business and emloyment is on the rise since transportation modes have turned this world into a global villege.
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Sentence: Presently, some proportion of people tend to stay with family while persuing university education to be blessed with affectionate comforts of family.
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Sentence: First and foremost, living with family during university study is lucrative to enjoy support of family members in domestic work like sanitation, food prepration, washing clothes where as it is very complicated to manage all household affairs while living away from family for study.
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Sentence: Furthermore, the presence of family members allows us to get proper guidance, healthy and hygenic food, prevention from bad habits, emotional support in difficult time for better overall development but people often suffer homesickness, health problems in absence of family during university studies at other places.
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Sentence: All of above, unlike others,people living with family feel more safer and secured from crime mishappenings.
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Sentence: Firstly, unlike with family,dwelling seperately away from family enables to be maverick and responsible.
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Sentence: For example, one learns to deal with domestic chorses like food making, cleaning, paying bills and so on.
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Sentence: From my notion, Although both sides have their own merits and demerits, one should analyze his own abilities, interst, requirements and circumstances before selecting whether to survive with or without family during tertiary level of education? for well-being of his future.
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